First

A Poem by Celestial

I sat beside my window pane
Reminiscing the past and olden days.
The day when I first got a whiff
Of your very manly and lovely scent.
The scent that made my heart pound;
The scent that brought me to the clouds.
The day when you first tuned a cord
That made me blush and heat up more.

It's been four years,
Yet the melodies you made are still in my ears.
I can still see your playful hands,
Playing a brown guitar.
And that alone mends my scars.
The scars you made,
When you said:
"I will never love you back until the end."
That made me cry and my heart bled.

"Four years had passed and yet,
He is still in my head.
"Forget him", that's what's on my mind,
Yet my heart is not blind.
And still sees my love for my one and only first love."

© 2019 Celestial

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barleygirl

Before I forget, line before last line in V1: I think you mean "chord" (not cord).
Your poem is very true-to-life about how these attractions go. In my life, I've always been the one who did not want to be in a committed relationship, so your message shows me how I probably hurt many along the way, some who are still hurting, possibly, becuz I would leave suddenly without saying much, just had to go on & be free. I have always longed for the people I loved, even when we did not stay in a relationship together, so the last verse is very true-to-life, the way we hold onto the memories forever. I like that your writing is straightforward & honest (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie