Who Is She?

A Poem about finding myself, and what exactly am I trying to find?

Who Is She?

Who is she?

Who is that girl that I keep trying to find?

Who is she?

Is she the girl illuminated by all of her hurt and pain?

Is she the girl that everyone keeps mocking?

The one who catches all of the stares?

Who is she?

Who is the girl that keeps screaming for help inside?

Who is the girl who keeps BEGGING for attention?

For love?

For care?

Who is she?

Who is the girl that keeps loving, never to be loved?

Is she the girl that keeps running into the wall of hurt repediately?

Is she the girl who keeps falling into the same traps?

Is she the girl who keeps pulling,

teasing,

diminishing

her own life?

Who is this girl?

Who is she?

If you know, tell me.

Because I don't.

I just want to know,

Who is she....

Author's Note

Please ignore grammar or spelling. In my poems and stories, I don't really pay attention to that. I just write what I feel, and if what I feel is wrong, so be it.

Reviews

[Void Unspoken]

what you feel can never be wrong because no one can actually change who you really are. dont worry about what others think of your opinion because it can never truly be wrong. it is always in the eyes of the beholder. remember that. as for your writing... i think that you are amazing! want to join a group? i have one called Rock On!!!! in case you are interested. i truly believe that you a great writer and that if you like it you should continue. no one... and i meen no one, can change who you are inside. if they dont like it... too bad. they will just have to deal with it.

Later... marleygirl.

[Dimples87]

Wow, this was a great poem where you've dared to ask yourself and others the tough questions that no one can answer but you when the time is right. What I loved about it is that you know that you want something more from yourself and others. This also had me thinking of myself.

[Holly]

Interesting poem, I was thinking of someone while reading this. Thinking a little of myself too. Great job on this. =]