~Nothing Else Matters~

“What lies behind us and what lies ahead of us are tiny matters compared to what lives within us.”

Henry David Thoreau

 

No matter what we’ve been through

you’ve given me hope for something new

trying to dry all the tears that I’ve cried

dying to feel alive… again… inside.

 

Accepting the way I feel for you

has opened my eyes to a different view

no longer trapped in cracked mirrors

seeing facts a whole lot clearer.

 

A world apart stands a simple man

holding my heart within his hands

spilling the sand, we watch it scatter

love expand s--so nothing else matters.

 

When the madness of sadness starts to creep in

I’m stronger-no longer- do I have to pretend

fear fades with each breath that I take

shaking charades made by mistake.

 

Trust I feel and I share with you

kinship of friendship accrued and grew

we’ll get through each path we choose to pursue

these three words don't always spell disaster

I’ll be loving you and nothing... else... matters.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Oh , my Romanticism . Haven't seen this for a while. In fact is not very common around here (The cafe). The use of intense emotion as an authentic source of aesthetic experience, placing new emphasis on such emotions as apprehension, horror and terror, and awe. In this writing we find all of them. In fact this is probably the "darkest " writing I have ever read from you. I can only assume the reasons are clearly described in the writing so there is no need to put them on show. I really relate to the gesture of the writing. You standing at the top of the castle, bruised and battered emotionally , a storm coming, winds , grey skies falling upon you , your black cloak and the image of the sun at the distance in its reflection that person that will still be there for you until the bitter end.

Nothing else would matter.

Thankyou

[AprilRN1210]

you are always so insightful, it is scary sometimes Rene.. you find a way to see into not only the emotion, the meaning, but the imagery and layers.. thank you for this awesome review.. and I agree with you wholeheartedly.. nothing else matters:)

[Laura Lynn]

I'm listening to this and it's like really important, you know. Like we have to tell ourselves this sometimes.

[AprilRN1210]

exactly.. I couldn't agree more.. that we do.. nice to meet you.. thank you for reading and reviewing.

[stars are far]

That was very sweet and heartfelt, and the music fits the feeling you feel while reading this, you did a great work, well done :)

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you.. I am glad you enjoyed it as it was meant..

[Jan Drei]

I can feel the emotion and passion to the subject. Continue to inspire others through telling more stories about you and this awesome guy who redeemed us all from sin.God bless

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you for this kind review.. I am glad I could touch you.. same blessings to you as well, my friend..

[Poetic Beauty]

These are true words of love. When find great love and happiness when we allow it enter into our hearts.

[AprilRN1210]

if we are lucky enough to have the courage, yes.. thank you.

[Stonz P.]

Wow, coincidentally I have been listening to a cover of this song by 'Apocalyptica' for the past few minutes..
This is a great piece but I wish you had written something totally original because you have a flair to play with words... I mean, this is a really good inspired piece but you could have created something original and I am sure it would have been more awesome..

"When the madness of sadness starts to creep in
I’m stronger-no longer- do I have to pretend
fear fades with each breath that I take
shaking charades made by mistake."

I loved these lines...
Well done as usual..

[AprilRN1210]

tell me not to fuss and you come over here fussing at me... I see how it is!.. kidding:P
yes.. it was semi-inspired by the song.. I was writing and the words came flowing out then thought of the song to go with words and the effect is what you see.. I will work on my "originality" for you:P
thank you for this lovely review.. it is always so nice to see you and hear your thoughts on my work..

[Stonz P.]

heehhee... Always a pleasure to read something good and fresh :)

[AprilRN1210]

..................:P................

[An owl on the moon]

There is a spring-like mood in your words... love coming to life in you... all around you. Yes, in love, real love, there is trust and hope and peace... and it secures the soul to everything else it must face. Beautifully done!

[AprilRN1210]

I am always in awe when writers as talented as you are---come to read my work and actually like it.. I always think... why would you read me... then when you write such beautiful comments, it humbles me and touches me in a way that I cannot explain.. You are always so encouraging and kind and that means a lot to me.. I adore your work, anxiously awaiting each new piece you add...I love your comments, each one a mini poem in itself.. casting such warm, enchanting magic as you touch upon the heart of the writer's intent... and I treasure your friendship.. thank you Craig...

[An owl on the moon]

You are such a precious friend... and wondrous poet... all you do lifts me and all those around you... So grateful that you're here and that you share your beautiful heart and soul with us each day... :))))

[Bright Ocean Star]

April, the honesty and emotion in this one are beautifully open and refreshing. I love the last stanza
"Trust I feel and I share with you
kinship of friendship accrued and grew
we’ll get through each path we choose to pursue"

Your words flow so smoothly, your rhyme scheme is impeccable ....great write!

[AprilRN1210]

Hey girl!... I was being really open with this one.. and sure wasn't expecting what came out.. thank goodness it turned out ok and you enjoyed.. always nice to see your bright warm light grace my page.. thank you!.. will be by your page soon ma'am.. ((hugs))

[Avinash]

First thing first, It made me smile :). Finally the arrow has hit you as well. But this time the victim seems to be a fine poetess. Romantic serenade like above was bound to follow. We are too lonely to see the beauty and hope in true manner unless we are in love and it is reflected through our soulmate. This poem has deeper meanings and has been written to touch and move the soul. I must tell it successfully accomplishes it.

[AprilRN1210]

wow...Avinash, I don't know what to say.. this review has humbled me.. I admit, this one was a very emotional piece.. wasn't sure how it would turn out.. I had a lot of feelings bubbling up inside me when I sat down to write this and decided to let go and just let it flow... actually kinda surprised me that this is what came out.. who knew.. I am glad that I could make you smile, as this awesome review has done for me.. I always look forward to your visits as they are insightful, thoughtful, encouraging, and honest.. thank you.. I am blessed to call you friend.. :)

[NoelHC]

As soon as I saw the title that song came to mind, and so when it started to play I was all like "YES!!"
Excellent words and flow, really enjoyed that.
Applying my usual last word of the line test worked for me again, a mini poem with in a poem, like those nesting Russian dolls.
Thanks for bringing this to my attention.

[AprilRN1210]

Hey Noel!!!... It is so good to see you!.. how are ya?.. Yes, this song was playing in my heart when I wrote this, so decided to add it.. I am glad you enjoyed and it passed the test!.. thank you my sweet friend..

[Jesse Booker]

Wonderful! Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem. I feel like you've explored both the light and dark side of love in this poem in a very eloquent way. Well done!

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you for this lovely review. I am glad you enjoyed..