Impossible to read (and not listen to) and not smile...this is such a delightful little piece April...well actually it's not little, it's a gorgeously-crafted work that is as gentle as a lullaby...it totally fits your style...your two most unmistakable trademarks are alliteration and flow, and they really drive home the sweetness and innocence in this one...actually I would add your knack for rhyme to that list now too, which gets better with every poem...if your heart is not warmed by this piece, you don't have one...dreadfully cute yet astoundingly captivating...another winner my friend :)
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10 Years Ago
what a lovely, delightful review Steve!! you have just made my heart smile!! Thank you so much... aw.. read morewhat a lovely, delightful review Steve!! you have just made my heart smile!! Thank you so much... awwww, my "trademarks" eh?... am I getting that predictable?? I sure hope not :(
I am tickled you enjoyed this one...
10 Years Ago
Haha There is absolutely nothing wrong with trademarks...people cringe when I tell them they have tr.. read moreHaha There is absolutely nothing wrong with trademarks...people cringe when I tell them they have trademarks, I don't know why...I think every writer needs one at least...they define us and our work, and make us unique...funny thing is, I don't think I have any myself...if I do, they are not obvious to me haha ;P
I love the recital. Your voice is charming, and perfectly suits this piece.
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10 Years Ago
Hey girl... that was me being silly and mushy for my niece, trying to lighten her spirits.. I am gla.. read moreHey girl... that was me being silly and mushy for my niece, trying to lighten her spirits.. I am glad you enjoyed.. thank you so much..
You've outdone yourself April. I think this is probably the very best that I have read of yours. Bravo. She is certainly loved by you.
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Thank you Derick... I am tickled you like this one.. was trying to brighten the spirits of my niece... read moreThank you Derick... I am tickled you like this one.. was trying to brighten the spirits of my niece...
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And brighten I am sure you did. Because this made me smile real big and I'm a cynic, well sort of.
hard on the outside, soft and mushy on the inside... don't fool me at all.. we are too much alike:P
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Yeah I've had to develop this rough exterior to protect that mushy inside. I'm kinda like a turtle t.. read moreYeah I've had to develop this rough exterior to protect that mushy inside. I'm kinda like a turtle that way
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don't we all, who have had a hard life:)
turtle that's cute... snapping one.. haha...
wa.. read moredon't we all, who have had a hard life:)
turtle that's cute... snapping one.. haha...
was thinking more of an M&M... hard on the outside, not easily cracked, but soft and sweet on the inside... :P
just the right amount of warmth can make you melt...lol
Impossible to read (and not listen to) and not smile...this is such a delightful little piece April...well actually it's not little, it's a gorgeously-crafted work that is as gentle as a lullaby...it totally fits your style...your two most unmistakable trademarks are alliteration and flow, and they really drive home the sweetness and innocence in this one...actually I would add your knack for rhyme to that list now too, which gets better with every poem...if your heart is not warmed by this piece, you don't have one...dreadfully cute yet astoundingly captivating...another winner my friend :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
what a lovely, delightful review Steve!! you have just made my heart smile!! Thank you so much... aw.. read morewhat a lovely, delightful review Steve!! you have just made my heart smile!! Thank you so much... awwww, my "trademarks" eh?... am I getting that predictable?? I sure hope not :(
I am tickled you enjoyed this one...
10 Years Ago
Haha There is absolutely nothing wrong with trademarks...people cringe when I tell them they have tr.. read moreHaha There is absolutely nothing wrong with trademarks...people cringe when I tell them they have trademarks, I don't know why...I think every writer needs one at least...they define us and our work, and make us unique...funny thing is, I don't think I have any myself...if I do, they are not obvious to me haha ;P
love to read this side of you April RN ... makes me feel like those soft fuzzy blankies we all need from time to time.
be well One a day! ;)
E.
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10 Years Ago
well, hey there E! glad you enjoyed my silly "auntie" side.. we are a mess when you get us two toget.. read morewell, hey there E! glad you enjoyed my silly "auntie" side.. we are a mess when you get us two together I admit... should hear some of our "escapades.... might write a few of them... will have you rolling in laughter at the trouble I get myself into sometimes when playing.. ha.. nice to see you my One-A-Day.. thank you:)
I think my original review still fits. "Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww . . ." A great, nice tribute to your niece; I imagine she shares several of your own attributes, sweet and sassy. An endearing piece, April.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Doc... :P
and she is a lot like me, bless her heart...
A very nice poem. I like the poetry. Nice to read rhyme and song. I liked your voice. Made the poem come alive and beautiful. Thank you for sharing the verbal poetry and the poem.
Coyote
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10 Years Ago
well, hey again... so tickled you enjoyed this one.. it was meant to cheer my niece up.. just showin.. read morewell, hey again... so tickled you enjoyed this one.. it was meant to cheer my niece up.. just showing my playful side.. thank you for taking the time to read and listen, I appreciate it..
10 Years Ago
You are welcome. I have three Grand-boys. I know the cartoons and the nursery rhymes.
Hi April just got the sound going to hear you recitation, you have such a sweet voice, I guess you tuned it to fit the type of poem you were reading but you truly have a beautiful tone that brings the poem alive into the room, so whats next.....naughty girl maybe :)
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10 Years Ago
well, lookie at you Richie... I am glad... thank you... ha.. go for it..