If......

just thinking out loud

If I were a Star

glittering, animated fun

incandescent illumination

second only to the sun.

 

If I were a  Flower

fleshy petals dripping confection

infatuation’s aphrodisiac

dulcet, aromatic affection.

 

If I were an  Angel

alluring mankind

bewitching enticement

both sinful and divine.

 

If I were a Dream

tantalizing, magnetic illusion

provocative stimulation

delicious diverting delusion.

 

 

If I were a Thought

refreshing delight

entertain, captivate

stimulate and excite.

Reviews

[Tree]

Star Flower Angel Dream Thought. These bold headliner words are by themselves a poem, and you poeticize around each one of those words in a creative, and rhythmic way. I like when you liken the dream to/ Magnetic illusion. very cool way to describe the energy we build upon and harness in our deepest sleep.


Diego

[AprilRN1210]

thank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wrote it while "daydreaming" at work.. wishing to be anything and anywhere else.. these images are what flowed from my pen.. I appreciate your time and thoughts, it means a lot coming from someone who writes as well as you do:)

[An owl on the moon]

Dear poet, how you awaken glimpses of yourself in every line, these sweet, sacred sights that fill the soul with joy, with bliss, with dreamish delight. In some way we become such wondrous illuminations, aphrodisiacs, enticements, and more, and through your poetic music you speak it into the world. Play on, always.

[AprilRN1210]

you're always so sweet, thank you, Craig. I do hope to awaken in others and stir in me what needs to be.

[Re-Pete]

Great imagery. Beautiful telling words. Sometimes a single word or thought can capture so much. Enjoyed this very much. Nice thoughts. Well done.

[David Scott]

The If's and But's of life... Thankfully we can transform our if's as we choose.
Looks like great intentions are in place already.

[emmajoy]

What a concoction you've mixed here...tis fun and sexy, alluring and wanton... quite naughty in fact! Whatever you write: naughty, nice, long or short has style and wit. Good for you.

[FaeryQueen]

this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo inspirational!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Richard Guimond]

if i was a garden i would like to cherish such a flower
nice i love it nice graphic to

[WanderAsia]

I adore this piece, the words seem edible! This poem seems to shimmers light and joy. I particularly enjoyed the words you chose to describe the flower "fleshy petals".

[Jamestown]

This piece is really cool as well, fun free thinking and full of imagination.
Good vibe! PTL!

[AprilRN1210]

I apologize for the delayed response, live has been a little chaotic lately.. Thank you for this lovely review, I appreciate it my friend.. I am glad you enjoyed..

[AprilRN1210]

*life* not live.. grrrr gotta love autocorrect..

[Angad Waraich]

Wow! this piece radiates joy and positive energy .
Wonderfully penned .
Very well done.

Thank you.
Angad

[AprilRN1210]

Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed:)

[Bright Ocean Star]

April, I love this beautiful piece. It is captivating, enchanting, and joyful. Great writing, again and again. I love to read what floats through that talented brain of yours. :)

[AprilRN1210]

Hey girl!.. Thank you.. lots of random, silly things float through this quirky brain of mine, I am tickled you enjoy it.. Always such a pleasure to see you!.. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.. ((hugs))

[Bright Ocean Star]

hugs to you, too! Hope you had a great Thanksgiving! :)