Glow Stars

It's old, no-one left me!

What to do at  2am

when your love

has left you.

 

Stick glow stars on

the ceiling whilst

humming “fly me

to the moon”

 

Lie back looking

at the night sky

and cry…

 

Reviews

[Raja]

this is such a smart and crisp poem that would fill your heart with an interest to love more...the words and...

Thanks.

Raja

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a tenderness here in the feelings of lost love (and was happy for your note). Have thought often of the wonder of placing glow stars on the ceiling. My nephew used to have them. Your words are beautifully poignant...

[vincentbals]

Great poem. Brings up a lot of emotion.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Getting lost in fantasy is the one true cure for reality... the wording at first seems so simple but pondering it brings many layers.

[Angel's Lady]

Good write, no matter how old it is.....(loved the video, doll!)

[deeps]

Profound write really! Makes one ponder.

[Jibey]

Well, yes... sometimes we have to construct our own universe and look at it...