Glow Stars

It's old, no-one left me!

What to do at  2am

when your love

has left you.

 

Stick glow stars on

the ceiling whilst

humming “fly me

to the moon”

 

Lie back looking

at the night sky

and cry…

 

Reviews

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

:) and cry indeed .... I think I missed those poems you wrote back in April 10 , wonder what were I doing than!

[cartera]

But only till morning . . .
Good piece of work.
ATB
Alex.

[howlfjdks]

Ahhhh...so tender and beautiful.

[Narnie]

Is there chocolate too? This is lovely...

[Alicante lullaby]

tender and emotive...

[darkgurl]

"Fly me to the moon" Now I am thinking of that song. This is a lovely captivating write.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

So tender..vulnerable in its honest voice..i would do he same if my love left at 2 am..well expressed.

[Lilly]

Beautiful in a simple way. I love the scene you have created here. Bittersweet in a way.

[Wondering Mind]

Well, at 2:00 am awake and alone, I write, or try to, but the snapshot you give here is much more interesting. Thank you for sharing.

[Another Relic]

Funny and sad at the same time. (In other words, please be truuue.) Good poem.