Lip Wax

Feel like I’ve

had my upper lip

waxed except its

not my moustache

you ripped off it’s

my smile.  

Reviews

[Liza]

smart and witty

[Anicca]

Brilliant, very visual piece. Short yet effective!

[Raja]

Wonderful. I think there is no need to populate more words in this poem. Only, these much is okay to guide me to the main part.

Like it.

Thanks.

Raja

[Jonathan Ballam]

Ouch!

It's good to see I'm not the only one who has a dark sense of humor from time to time.

Great poem April ;)

[Antonio Valentino]

I'm thinking go a little lighter on the wax next time maybe?

Seriously April, this was great.

Loved the twist!
Antonio :)

[Vanna Renee]

Made me laugh with a haunted humor :)
Niceeee

[PianoandPage]

wow. damn.

these short emotional punch poems are going to kill me. reminds me of how my wife write's. :)

love this. love it love it love it.

[Michael W. Farrelly]

Ouch....should I say 'b*****d'? :) Liking the staccato of it.

[Jibey]

Painfully graphic! Hot wax!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well now that is what I call brutally honest.