Lip Wax

Feel like I’ve

had my upper lip

waxed except its

not my moustache

you ripped off it’s

my smile.  

Reviews

[Jay Levon]

Ha! Love this. Perfection

[Stammers]

clever, I like this, kudos.

[...]

Painful. Clever wording.

[Hello, Goodbye]

perfect portrayal of brevity poetry

[carriehiggs]

Yessshh I really like this one. You get away with such shortness and create such a powerful image x

[Sherwette]

Short and to the point. I like it.

[Fabric Pulse]

"Entertaining" while serious, due to your word choice. A delightful bit! Though, I'm sad you were suffering throughout this time period.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

What a painful thought
and to have a smile ripped off.. this
to me would be the worst thing ever, April.

Good job with this short poem.

Chloe

[reminder]

Painful! The metaphor describes the hurt. Nicely done!