Cupboard Love

I knew it was love

when I found myself

in the closet

sniffing your coat.

Reviews

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So cool. An expression of love without the usual mushy love stuff.

[R J Askew]

You make me laugh. This is like the poor old squashed fly. There is an almost word cartoon quality to it. Whatever, it works.

[Buddhistboy73]

mmm, so a different style here...this one actually made me laugh out loud! Great visual! Reminds me of one of those comedy birthday cards.....:)

[PianoandPage]

this made me smile. when my wife and i first met one of the first things she did was smell my neck.

i love how you write. you capture the idiosyncrasies of love with skill.

[Shalini Dinesh]

awesome, i never knew that such a short poem can convey love in such a beautiful manner....

[Murphy]

This is funny, cute, scary, all of the above. Nice little piece.

[Emily B]

how else could you know?

lovely

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Oh yes! ... I know excatlly what you mean

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Now that is the truth wrapped up nice and tight.
Short and to the point... that takes mad skills.

[Angel's Lady]

Or holding your pillow so I can fall asleep...

Great write, Apes...