i love everything about this piece. the subtlety, the underlying yearnings, the word choice -everything.
it's simply astounding how our routines bring back memories of the beloved people in our lives and this poem just perfectly captures that mystical feeling of recollection.
the words hold the attention of the reader so firmly that it warps them into your own universe.
i loved how you give a progression of emotions by presenting a step-by-step procedure of making tea. very novel indeed.
I don't know where you are from but this has a very British feel to it, perhaps it's the full fat milk with the tea,
But what do I know?
As always you don't disappoint
Well done
Its not just a tea, its a memory, when you lose love, everything remind you , of the times that will never be back, even a cup of tea, a brush of the hair, a simple touch of the skin , its never just a simple tea , for you ... Thanks Yossi
i love everything about this piece. the subtlety, the underlying yearnings, the word choice -everything.
it's simply astounding how our routines bring back memories of the beloved people in our lives and this poem just perfectly captures that mystical feeling of recollection.
the words hold the attention of the reader so firmly that it warps them into your own universe.
i loved how you give a progression of emotions by presenting a step-by-step procedure of making tea. very novel indeed.
How wonderful, and how tastefully you describe the post-coital cup so appreciated by lovers. I have no idea if you are British, but if not, you have the ritual - the technique - very well mastered. You can be proud. This is a gentle poem, well constructed but more than that - (which is technical) - it is smooth and easy on the ear. A delight.
John
I love words and I like to write poems. Sometimes words just come and I don't know where from but I write them down anyway. There's something very powerful in the written word. It shows you where y.. more..