The Sweetest Twist of Fate (Part 2)

A response to Murphy's 'Sweetest Twist of Fate' His text is black, mine is grey :)

Hopes and dreams

in you take root

and grow with tender care

 

Seedlings shyly

taking form

bathed in the warmth of your kiss

 

Whilst memories are

formed anew

as these two lives we share

 

Sprouting shoots

that bloom and thrive

with each new reminisce

 

Twas on a limb

we met that day

the sweetest twist of fate

 

Flowering vines

become entwined

encircling the tree

 

It turned out

I was just in time

when I thought I was late

 

Where our lives changed

that fateful day when

love found you and me

Reviews

[Murphy]

Each line wrapped so perfectly... can't imagine part one ever standing alone. I love it!