Read My Eyes

Eyes that speak

eyes that listen

eyes that smile

eyes that glisten

eyes that flirt

eyes that hide

eyes that beg

eyes that shy

eyes of hazel

eyes of blue

eyes that say

I love you

Reviews

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Eyes are indeed the portals to the soul. You can see a million tales in the depths of the human eyes.

Very well written. Keep up the good work.

Peace and love,
Gabe

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

There is so much there in those eyes..... so much to be read, so much to see..... you captured a nice exchange here.

Kath

[SweetPeachesAlways]

awwwwwwww...very nicely written. love it!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Wow a very wonderfully written piece. Loved the idea and flow!

[Murphy]

Eyes that dance and whisper in return... nicely arranged - a beautiful expression.

[J.P.O.et]

I really like the repetitition with your carefully selected follow ups
and then the end it totally fit the scheme but was a fitting close
Nice little piece from anyone's eyes
J.P.O.et

[R J Askew]

I enjoyed this. It is short, but very active, with lots of good verbs and it zooms in on an exciting part of an exciting feature of any human being. It is also sexy.

[__Flaw__]

Very smooth indeed. A different one from ur side...and compelling :)))
Eyes of blue :))))

[Forest Green]

Expressively concise...the eyes give it all away.

Very special...I enjoyed reading your poem.

Nicely done!

Daniel

[forfila]

Such beautiful eyes =) I likedthis, I have a love for womens eyes.

This was lovely, meaningful and sweet too=)

Love
Me