Read My Eyes
A Poem by
April Child
Eyes that speak
eyes that listen
eyes that smile
eyes that glisten
eyes that flirt
eyes that hide
eyes that beg
eyes that shy
eyes of hazel
eyes of blue
eyes that say
I love you
© 2009 April Child
Reviews
So simple and so sweet..
Posted 14 Years Ago
Beautiful, short but sweet :) I love it.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Beautiful, short but sweet :) I love it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wasn;t sure about the repetition of eyes on first read, but on further reading, i like this. Not sure why, but i do. Good final line too....
Posted 14 Years Ago
wasn;t sure about the repetition of eyes on first read, but on further reading, i like this. Not sure why, but i do. Good final line too....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I am yet to be disappointed when reading your work.
The eyes are the windows to your soul, and soul is what I always find a lot of in your poems.
Well done
Posted 15 Years Ago
I am yet to be disappointed when reading your work.
The eyes are the windows to your soul, and soul is what I always find a lot of in your poems.
Well done
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Very beautiful. You can't tell a lie with your eyes and you can always tell the emotions of others through them
Voice
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very beautiful. You can't tell a lie with your eyes and you can always tell the emotions of others through them
Voice
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow. The eyes have it then! This motion is passed! Great job!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Wow. The eyes have it then! This motion is passed! Great job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The eyes and the mouth are the most expressive parts of the face. I have been melted like wax or turned to stone by a woman's eyes. When, as in this poem, they say "I love you," it makes a heart increase its beat. Lovely thoughts put into words, April Child.
Posted 16 Years Ago
The eyes and the mouth are the most expressive parts of the face. I have been melted like wax or turned to stone by a woman's eyes. When, as in this poem, they say "I love you," it makes a heart increase its beat. Lovely thoughts put into words, April Child.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Eyes are most sexy part ... we seen Yossi
Posted 16 Years Ago
Eyes are most sexy part ... we seen Yossi
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I've seen those eyes through the prism of my heart and the depths of my dreams, fleeting, just out of reach, finger tips away, slipping, always slipping into the future. Still, I follow the siren call of eyes that say more than words ever could. Lovely work, again.
Posted 16 Years Ago
I've seen those eyes through the prism of my heart and the depths of my dreams, fleeting, just out of reach, finger tips away, slipping, always slipping into the future. Still, I follow the siren call of eyes that say more than words ever could. Lovely work, again.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this poem is adorable. I love it!
Posted 16 Years Ago
this poem is adorable. I love it!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 21, 2008
Last Updated on April 28, 2009
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April Child United Kingdom
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I love words and I like to write poems. Sometimes words just come and I don't know where from but I write them down anyway. There's something very powerful in the written word. It shows you where y..
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