Love Bites 2

more random love doodles...

I wake up with

you in my head

blankets warm

I sleepily linger

enjoying your company

a moment longer

you close your eyes

and find me inside

your mind all 

sleepy and smiling.

 

     ……….

 

Looking in the mirror

I see your reflection.

Opening a cupboard

I find you nestling

among cereal packets.

As I stir my coffee

you swirl around in my cup.

I pull out a drawer

and there you are lounging

                   … and I smile.

 

     ……….

 

Suddenly I find

I want to

know all the

little things.

Reviews

[J.P.O.et]

Wow, this is once again beautifull, I feel blessed to be the first to check this
'I find you nestling, among cereal packets'
I love this and you have a diff but equally effective way of expressing your feelings
The dark as opposed to light print, is there some sort of sig., of course there is
one is before and the other now......... please explain to me further
Thank you April Child
J.P.O.et

[R J Askew]

'Opening a cupboard I find you nestling among cereal packets' is wonderful, very amusing. The whole middle verse is great and there is a serious intent in the last verse. The write of someone in the 'love loon' phase of a new relationship!

[Blackbirdsong]

This is just so perfectly expressed...though this is a personal piece you have written it so that others can see themselves in this as well. I have lived moments like this myself. There is a tenderness here that just lingers.

[Murphy]

Simple thoughts and feelings so elegantly expressed with a clear, natural flow... a beautiful trbute to a beautiful love... a fortunate man indeed. For what it's worth, while reading this, I heard a small brook, bubbling in the background... haha... have no idea what that was about... just my experience, but it was a beautiful one! Words are well appointed and fit very nicely. Great job/

[Travis Lawrence]

Very nice, a personal flash, a photograph. Ah, how I wish I could experience the feeling sometime soon! Love the last stanza, "I want to / know all the / little things".

-Travis

[An owl on the moon]

Beautiful and soft and sweet... Love the movement of your words as you walk through your morning. So deeply personal; I almost feel as if I'm seeing something I shouldn't! Very well done!

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Simple love poetry. Just Beautiful!

[forfila]

Awe April, this is darling poetry, so simple yet deep... I really liked this,,, beautifuly done =)

Love
Me

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Wow. I love it when you get prizes in your cereal! Breakfast AND a toy! That's beautiful, man!

Hey, I love these, April! More, please! These were just simply yummy!
You are a creative genius! Applause, applause!

[Keith]

ahhhh....
to sit back and watch the steady progression of the waif into the delirium of dementia is de-livering the oh so sweet reminisce.

I love love.


Vivid clarity within your imagery. 'scuse the commentary upon some fine writing.

[Phil Sanders]

Mmm lovely .. and the little things make it so intimate ....