The Moon

I love the moon

I’d like to eat it with a spoon

but my arms aren’t long enough

life is tough.

Reviews

[Sea Dreams ~marina~]

If not being able to stretch your arms to the moon is your biggest problem, then you are doing pretty well. LOL.
I don't know many people who would even try, so life is tough but you can't say you didn't try.
There is much depth in four brief lines. You've done a great job. Thanks for entering the comp!
- M

[Forest Green]

Our far-flung wishes leave us empty and dissatisfied sometimes.

As they say...aim for the moon...you won't hit it but at least you might get one past the woodpile...;)

Nice send.

Daniel

[Larissa G.]

Cute. It's short and sweet, and not a bad piece. :)

[E. M. Murren]

LOL very nice. It is sweet.

[V. K. Harris]

Cool I love it......Life is tough.

[Leticia Bailey]

I love the simplicity of your poem and the humorous, yet wise, conclusion. Well done. Good luck to you in the contest.

[R J Askew]

ach, a lovely little bit of humour. i love this...the wit and the silly truth in it! with a bitter little twist in it.

[Sean Allen]

Life is only tough if you live it!
You could just use a straw, don't you know, or pull a George Bailey and rope it, then the moonbeams could shoot out of your fingertips... oh forget it!.
You're right, Life is tough, just get over it!

[Tomás Ó C..]

Cool and cute!!! I love it!!!