Power

A Poem by April Child

Acrostic :)

Power, an oasis of bliss, an

Ocean of selfish greed

Warping our minds with a kiss of desire

Eating away our sanctified adequacy
Reminding us of constant feebleness

© 2010 April Child

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An owl on the moon

Brilliance in simplicity, you capture so well the essence of power and its roll in human endeavors. Love your writing skill!

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

E. J. Gette

See...short, powerful, non-rhyming. I like it.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jessica{is inspired by ..

This is short, but it has a good message.

"Warping our minds with a kiss of desire"

I like that line especially. It reminds me of that saying "Absolute power corrupts absolutely" just getting a small taste of power makes us go mad with it.

I like the message you are getting across with this one. Nice job!

Jessica

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

BjH	very good, any more words and you could have made a meal of this bjh Posted 17 Years Ago very good, any more words and you could have made a meal of this bjh Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 22, 2008
Last Updated on August 1, 2010

Author

April Child

United Kingdom

About

I love words and I like to write poems. Sometimes words just come and I don't know where from but I write them down anyway. There's something very powerful in the written word. It shows you where y.. more..