Velvet love

Velvet love

A Poem by ajelly
"

that moment that remains suspended in your emotions, an impasse

"

Turnt

Never saw it coming

  this sweet impasse emotion.


Tho truthfully,

 It was great,

   sweet velvet love.

© 2017 ajelly


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Serene it its soft flow, a beautiful suspension of time, wonderful :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Love it! Powerful poetry. Starz x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you sum up perfectly what confuses and confounds us most of our life, that it is in the knowing of what love could be and could have been that we learn the harshest of lessons in life. How long do we strive for perfection, while not seeing that it's the imperfections that we love most. Love it.

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Added on December 2, 2016
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Tags: non-attachment, Knowledge, Desire, Passion, Contempt, ApricotJelly

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ajelly
ajelly

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A light-hearted soul - that revels in simplicity of innocent observations - not afraid of exploring the edges of the unknown places ... Looking forward to having place to share my thoughts, never .. more..

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A Poem by ajelly