Fire burns blue

Fire burns blue

A Poem by ajelly

Scars cut deep

Deeper than bones

Anger seethes fresh

Fresher than the sun

Sun shines bright

Brighter than white

White reflects love

Lovers intertwined

Intertwined in the night

Teeth sink deep

Deeper than bones

Anger seethes fresh

Fresher than light

Light burns bright

Brighter than night

Night goes blank

Blanker than black

Black turns to red

Redder than fire

Fire burns blue

Hotter with desire.

© 2016 ajelly


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This is pretty damn awesome. Reads flawlessly and even if it was dropped and smashed onto the floor, could be put back together again with ease, with beginning, middle and end so interchangeable. Love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


ajelly

8 Years Ago

wow, that review rocked my world - thank you!
Lorry

8 Years Ago

Ha, you're welcome :)

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Added on November 7, 2016
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Tags: love, Scars, passion, fire, blue, fresh, black, white, night, light, ApricotJelly

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ajelly
ajelly

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A light-hearted soul - that revels in simplicity of innocent observations - not afraid of exploring the edges of the unknown places ... Looking forward to having place to share my thoughts, never .. more..

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A Poem by ajelly