affect

a few fragments of thought

 

The wind covets
silent whispers of
autumn’s dark
secret as her circle
stirs in delight…
slipping…
sliding…
through a labyrinth
of cool streams
cleansing Aphrodite’s
long, strands
of ebony
while eyes undress
me in blushing hues of

yesterday…

Reviews

[Charles]

I've been browsing through your work this morning and am delighted to have come across it. Each poem is a study in imagery and sensuality. Really great lines in each of the 4-5 I've read. This one has a slightly different form (nice to see how you slip from one form to another with quiet grace) but is no less effective for the short lines and more direct wording. The only 'flaw' that stood out here was 'silent whispers' - a redundency it seems. The line works as well without 'silence' because a whisper, after all, is still a whisper... shhhhh. :-)

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, this is absolutely beautiful and the imagery is just amazing. I love this piece, awesome write!!!

Heather

[Bertie]

Love it :) Just plain love it
Great flow and beautiful imagery

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Short, relaxing and beautiful.