Black Meets Black

 

It is said that opposites attract...

I don't know about that...

We're two silver dragons...

 

Dressing in purple and

Bathing in oils that compel,

Truth disclosed beneath

A waxing moon...

 

The clouds hid the stars...

 

Two Rowan trees

Understand their destination.

I'll feed you the orange berries...

Is a soul full of hate really...

 

More

Powerful?

 

Tell me.

 

There are many initiations in this
 Life............

 

No one else can do it.  What will

You do now?  Without me...?

 

Think carefully before you answer...

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Amanda]

No one else can do it. What will
You do now? Without me...?

Think carefully before you answer...

there is no one without the other...and even though opposites attract, sometimes it can be a match made in hell.

a exceptional piece of work, nonetheless, my dear...thanks for sharing.

A xox

[Jennifer]

I love this!

[Janna Nicole]

Great imagery. Your words gave me beautiful scenes.

[Mr Whiskers]

I love the darkness and strength behind the questions. "Is a soul full of hate really more powerful"---it's intense and I can relate to that sentiment. "we are two silver dragons", also a favourite line.

[Clockwork]

I like the symbolism and the imagery here. You use a lot of sound surface words that have a nice network of meaning beneath. I think that the ellipses break up the flow of the piece and make it slightly awkward. I think that the parts of stanza eight line to could also be tweaked a little. Enjoyable overall.

[The Mad Prophet]

Not bad, very focused. Has a sense of loss right after gain. Very well written, very well done. Like always with your stuff, very well thought out.

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

I love the flow here and its darkness is very deep and real i sense its a part of an emotion that is close by at all times.An excellent write dear again,you astound me with Imagery and eloquence.
Dressing in purple and

Bathing in oils that compel,

Truth disclosed beneath

A waxing moon...



The clouds hid the stars...



Two Rowan trees

Understand their destination.

I'll feed you the orange berries...

Is a soul full of hate really...

Lasla

[Wildfleour]

I saw Ralphy added this to his favorites and I had to take a look. I am so glad I did.

This is an incredible write. I love so much about it. Truly. And by the way, I do not give false praise!

[Jessica Fox]

That is a cool picture, interesting poem good job

[Taylor H]

i liked this alot it sounded jsut like dialouge and i loved the picutre

[R J Askew]

Great voice in this poem. Commanding, urgent and direct. Makes one wonder about the truth of opposites attracting also. Really liked the silver dragons. Cld see them swirling skywards in some flight of mutual infatuation.