Sometimes

Sometimes

A Poem by TamiViolet

 

 

My friend, I held you in the highest regard

No one could replace you

 

You were larger than life although those

words echo...

 

Yes, I have whispered them in a past time

when the World was green with prospects

 

My fault...

 

I burn bridges too soon

Say goodbye too hastily

Not realizing...

 

We all have issues.

The World wasn't created for my happiness.

 

I just thought you and I were unbreakable.

Childish, yes?

 

We all break at some point, losing interest.

 

My friend...

 

How you have disappointed me, and I must

now accept that you were simply...

 

Unavailable.

 

 

 

© 2008 TamiViolet


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It doesn't make things better when we find out for ourselves the reasons. I enjoyed this poem. I found it simplistic but yet it packed some punch. We all have been hurt or disappointed by someone we felt deeply about and enjoyed there presence. Family and friends are really the only one that can hurt you. Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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It doesn't make things better when we find out for ourselves the reasons. I enjoyed this poem. I found it simplistic but yet it packed some punch. We all have been hurt or disappointed by someone we felt deeply about and enjoyed there presence. Family and friends are really the only one that can hurt you. Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This was a great poem although there are some of these people on here I wouldn't consider friend...more like backstabbing drama w****s. Wonderfully written great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Friendships are so valuable and precious but can be very fragile when trust is broken... really a deeply emotional right, once again your words and style make the feelings leap right off the screen...

I burn bridges too soon
Say goodbye too hastily
Not realizing...

I can relate to that stanza as I have done that myself... wonderfully written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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