Uncertainty

just a thought...deliberately short

 

Unable to pretend...

 

I can't say who I will become tomorrow,

for this moment is all I have....

 

All any of us has...

We never had a choice.

 

Blood breeds blood

Don't hold on too tight

 

Dream...

But the moment is now

 

And now has cunningly passed...

Forever.

 

Stop squeezing!

 

Are your fields colorful?

Or mere nightmares of gray?

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

My oh my what interesting questions you put forth... do we use the past to help guide our future or should the past be left behind so it don't hold us back... I think each situation is different and we must decide which is right... as humans we might error but if we do our best the colors of life will always be bright.

A very philosophical piece and certainly something we should all think about.

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Wow that was a great passage! It was amazing! I loved it

[R J Askew]

It's strange to think that all of us will be dead at some point. I don't think we should be depressed by the thought though, as that would be a waste of life. You are right that now is all we really have. And the cunningl line is great. As for colour... We cuttlefish are known as the chameleons of the sea and spend our times trying to outdo each other in our sheer colourifficness!

[Mr. Lopez]

This is a perfect poem that i needed to hear at the perfect time. How uncertain the future indeed.

Mr.Lopez

[Dani California]

And now has cunningly passed...
Forever.

Stop squeezing!


My dear friend, how you are able to tell the most complex of thoughts -- of truths -- in such a creative yet simple manner is truly impressive. This goes deep, yet sits quietly on the surface.

It will always be this moment. Always. And this same moment will always be passing and is forever gone so stop hanging onto it, and live now.. in this passing moment. lol So simple... yet not.

Yes, just LIVE.

Outstanding A. As your work always is ....