Winds of Change

Winds of Change

A Poem by TamiViolet

 

 

I trace the  memory of your lips as they softly kiss my tummy,

while days of wine and roses are buried beneath cobblestone

roads...

 

Hard and impenetrable...

 

Can you still feel my presence awaken you deep in the night

as your sleepy eyelashes brush my cheek?

 

We change and renew, but does love, in its purest form, alter

perception?

 

Destiny becomes impatient when we trip and fall...

 

too many times.

 

See into my soul, for I am now a traveler in the Dark Terrain
of my subconscious...

 

seeking enlightenment unparalleled...

 

stirring as I release...

 

Feeling my spine as it takes root in the Earth in attempt to
absorb positive energies...

 

While fierce winds sweep away a past that once dwelled in a
Season of Fire...

 

 

 

 

© 2012 TamiViolet


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I just have to say that I have been reading your work since I've been on here but never gave my review too you! I just think you take it above n beyond. Your words your magic with such seduction. It blows my mind. I love you poetry! I try to write like you but I can't or it not the write time! Your very gifted and thank you for letting be a friend of yours
Amazing, Brilliant poem!!

Much love n respect,
Anna
Huggsss

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.




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I believe it does alter it (at least in some cases). And you said "tummy". :) Well done. I like it and a great pic to go with it. Kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

A very spiritual poem, I thought. Really nice use of words too. Furthermore, it genuinely made me pause for thought. In some ways, life is looked upon as a journey in this poem. Something which we learn from on an emotional level, perhaps?

"We change and renew, but does love, in its purest form, alter perception?" These words pose a meaningful question. Perhaps it is asking the reader to think, whether or not our outlook on life is changed after the joy of love?

I felt that this was also very sensual, whilst reading it. A nice example of self-expression, from the heart.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Apollonia, your words harmonize with a sense of wisping beauty and nature and has a
connecting aura of romance that is imbued with passion, the heart can feel the
embrace as ascending thoughts; the renewing sense of wonder, astral and Stunning.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 4 people found this review constructive.

What a inspirational outlook into redemption... your words again speak so intense and with unwavering conviction

See into my soul, for I am now a traveler in the Dark Terrain
of my subconscious...

Oh those lines really sent a chill up my spine...

Spectacular as always.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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