Answer in Passion

inspired by my muse

 

 

Kiss uncontrollably

 

Before today melts into yesterday

And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows

 

Feel  brazenly

 

When Fire defines the Answer

And Heat over - rules the Mind

 

Love unconditionally

 

With pure intention...

And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly

 

Travel deep within me

 

Through Darkness you shall discover

A glistening Light

 

Hold close...

 

Gently...

 

Without spoken promise

Therein lies magic in the eyes...

 

Take...

 

Bravely give more...

 

Lover to Lover...

 

Flesh within Flesh...

 

Until our embers Seduce Eternity

 

Reviews

[Antony]

I feel I need to break this down as I read, to respond to each stanza, it is that good and I feel the need to interpret in how I think it reads.

Kiss uncontrollably
Before today melts into yesterday
And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows
This says to me that we should love with wild abandon, out of control, lick and suck each other dry, he who hesitates is lost and those thoughts become just that......thoughts lost in the abyss of dreams, never to become fruitful.


Feel brazenly
When Fire defines the Answer
And Heat over - rules the Mind
Be gallant in your convictions, when you know it is the desire and seduction that fuels your fire, don't allow your mind to think it may be something else, admit what it is.
Love unconditionally
With pure intention...
And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly
Nothing else nor no one else should matter at this time, a time when she will show you all you need to know and feel.
Travel deep within me
Through Darkness you shall discover
A glistening Light
Hold close...
Look deep within her heart, there are answers there for you
be humble, give in to her. Your reward awaits, it is her promise... not to be taken lightly.

Gently...
Without spoken promise
Therein lies magic in the eyes...
Take...
Bravely give more...
Lover to Lover...
Flesh within Flesh...
Until our embers Seduce Eternity
There are no need for words of promise, but rather a look into one anothers eyes, knowing what you give will be given in return, everything I do for you, I do for myself, for our passion will be forever, for each other.

Just my interpretation and you are such a provoker of thought.
Tony

[Angelic Darkness]

WOW! This is sensual, and very seductive...like calling your
lover to you. This line completely works for the ending, and I love
it...Flesh within Flesh...



Until our embers Seduce Eternity


Great job...AD

[R J Askew]

Marvellous stuff. This is the voice of Life speaking, telling us how to behave, driving us on. If we don't heed the voice... Life is the ultimate lover and we have to obey. When two people make love it is actually Life making love and Life is male and female. And will never be denied.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

it is truly a beautiful piece of writing... nicely done

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

I always love your work it's so passionate, and erotic...Muses are always a good thing to have, and i'm glad your muse inspires you so, because without that person i wouldn't be able to read great work. The colors of the picture and the colors of the words work together perfectly and enhances the feel of the poem. Loved it.

Danni

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Good job. I loved the fire analogy. And the pictures you put on here are always on point. You def have a unique and well-known writing style to you. People could read your poem and go, "oh, that's Apollonia newest work."


nice.

kena

[dark and twisty]

Must be one hell of a muse :)

Extraordinary work. You brought out the romantic spiritualism of what is more puritanically known as the sin of the flesh. Reminded me of stories like Tristan and Isolde and the beautiful Renaissance sculptures and paintings of two bodies melding in the act of love...

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

gee. erotica proclaims its destiny. superb imagery, so surreal.

[Laura E. Aranda]

This is so beautiful. I am glad I found this one to read. It was enchanting and dreamy but soo soo wonderful. Bravo! You are a great writer, these piece declares that! Cheers to your featured piece! Laura

[Legion]

When Fire defines the Answer

And Heat over - rules the Mind

really like those two lines. Good work. Wonderfully passionate.

[☮]

How passionate. You writing creates a soundtrack for your words. Darkness, eroticism, pain and love all in one. Love it.