Answer in Passion

inspired by my muse

 

 

Kiss uncontrollably

 

Before today melts into yesterday

And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows

 

Feel  brazenly

 

When Fire defines the Answer

And Heat over - rules the Mind

 

Love unconditionally

 

With pure intention...

And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly

 

Travel deep within me

 

Through Darkness you shall discover

A glistening Light

 

Hold close...

 

Gently...

 

Without spoken promise

Therein lies magic in the eyes...

 

Take...

 

Bravely give more...

 

Lover to Lover...

 

Flesh within Flesh...

 

Until our embers Seduce Eternity

 

Reviews

[Antony]

I feel I need to break this down as I read, to respond to each stanza, it is that good and I feel the need to interpret in how I think it reads.

Kiss uncontrollably
Before today melts into yesterday
And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows
This says to me that we should love with wild abandon, out of control, lick and suck each other dry, he who hesitates is lost and those thoughts become just that......thoughts lost in the abyss of dreams, never to become fruitful.


Feel brazenly
When Fire defines the Answer
And Heat over - rules the Mind
Be gallant in your convictions, when you know it is the desire and seduction that fuels your fire, don't allow your mind to think it may be something else, admit what it is.
Love unconditionally
With pure intention...
And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly
Nothing else nor no one else should matter at this time, a time when she will show you all you need to know and feel.
Travel deep within me
Through Darkness you shall discover
A glistening Light
Hold close...
Look deep within her heart, there are answers there for you
be humble, give in to her. Your reward awaits, it is her promise... not to be taken lightly.

Gently...
Without spoken promise
Therein lies magic in the eyes...
Take...
Bravely give more...
Lover to Lover...
Flesh within Flesh...
Until our embers Seduce Eternity
There are no need for words of promise, but rather a look into one anothers eyes, knowing what you give will be given in return, everything I do for you, I do for myself, for our passion will be forever, for each other.

Just my interpretation and you are such a provoker of thought.
Tony

[Theresa Anne]

Just saw your writing for the first time. Haven't been on in awhile. I must say it's excellent. The passion in your writing comes from deep within ones soul. I love this piece and will check out more of your work. You inspired me. The wording is amazing.

[Poetic Injustice]

The passion in your work! I relate. And well done! Write on, baby! =0)

[Reeses]

As usual, your work is great. Makes one embrace love in the midst of losing love. Great write!

[The Mad Prophet]

Like always, and I don't expect less from you so far, this is very passionate. You put a lot of emotion and thought through this poem. Very nicely done, very creative.

[Lyrical Love]

I NEED A MUSE LIKE THAT...LOL!
EXCELLENT WRITE. THE SENSUALITY OF THIS PIECE IS MARVELOUS.
PERFECT FLOW...a gentleness experienced here as well.
KUDOS!!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

"Until our embers Seduce Eternity"

Yes! I agree with Dani, this line is simply WOW! I found the entire piece so seductive and sensual but again so thoughtful! This is really full of passion...
I saw that feel of warmness and romance it is, which is simply awesome!
The style of writing, the font, formatting, picture...everything is just perfect!
Great work as always :)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Dani California]

"Until our embers Seduce Eternity"..

What a line! WOW!

This may very well be my favorite of yours A.
It's powerfully seductive and passionate...
yet whispers of longing.

"Without spoken promise
Therein lies magic in the eyes..."

Ahh.. yes, that is indeed where it is all
silently told.

This is a magificent piece! Though, I expect
nothing less from you my friend. No pressure. lol

[Mr. Deft Diction]

THIS IS FIRE!!! I love the build-up....it's got that sexy heat that I'm used to you bringing with your pieces. Seems like somebody is QUITE the muse for you.

Nice work!