Answer in Passion

inspired by my muse

 

 

Kiss uncontrollably

 

Before today melts into yesterday

And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows

 

Feel  brazenly

 

When Fire defines the Answer

And Heat over - rules the Mind

 

Love unconditionally

 

With pure intention...

And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly

 

Travel deep within me

 

Through Darkness you shall discover

A glistening Light

 

Hold close...

 

Gently...

 

Without spoken promise

Therein lies magic in the eyes...

 

Take...

 

Bravely give more...

 

Lover to Lover...

 

Flesh within Flesh...

 

Until our embers Seduce Eternity

 

Reviews

[Antony]

I feel I need to break this down as I read, to respond to each stanza, it is that good and I feel the need to interpret in how I think it reads.

Kiss uncontrollably
Before today melts into yesterday
And Life's Hourglass proclaims us Walking Shadows
This says to me that we should love with wild abandon, out of control, lick and suck each other dry, he who hesitates is lost and those thoughts become just that......thoughts lost in the abyss of dreams, never to become fruitful.


Feel brazenly
When Fire defines the Answer
And Heat over - rules the Mind
Be gallant in your convictions, when you know it is the desire and seduction that fuels your fire, don't allow your mind to think it may be something else, admit what it is.
Love unconditionally
With pure intention...
And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly
Nothing else nor no one else should matter at this time, a time when she will show you all you need to know and feel.
Travel deep within me
Through Darkness you shall discover
A glistening Light
Hold close...
Look deep within her heart, there are answers there for you
be humble, give in to her. Your reward awaits, it is her promise... not to be taken lightly.

Gently...
Without spoken promise
Therein lies magic in the eyes...
Take...
Bravely give more...
Lover to Lover...
Flesh within Flesh...
Until our embers Seduce Eternity
There are no need for words of promise, but rather a look into one anothers eyes, knowing what you give will be given in return, everything I do for you, I do for myself, for our passion will be forever, for each other.

Just my interpretation and you are such a provoker of thought.
Tony

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow what a beautiful transition from seizing the passionate moment to the deep journey into forever... you write with such intense emotion and desire... another fabulous piece from you.

[These Haunted Hallways]

WoW! Very romantic and lovely! It flowed so beautifully, and i can almost hear the waves crashing on the shore with them kissing on the beach hehe. Very intimate. Very beautiful job with this :)

B.A.

[Michael X]

Wow, I love this, seducingly tantalyzing, sensuously smooth, enticing
brilliant surrender of heated passions, apollonia, you have a way with romance
that defines the nature of love, in so many ways, the depth is breathtaking.

[Orlando Murcia]

Very sensual and moving
there is nothing that I didn't
like about this poem

Great work!

Orlando M

[Adela Muresan]

Uhh�this is intense =D, and very well penned.
What can I say? Good job, but I think the colors and the image make it seem a little ,,cheap,,- you might want to settle for average black and maybe a little more discreet image.

A.M.

[Amanda]

a really passionate piece, Apollonia! it is well written and flows quite smoothly. it seems like a poem within a poem, but that may just be me.

keep that muse close at hand, because inspiration always gives way to beautiful poetry....

good work, my friend :))

Amanda xox

[Fran Marie]

A most beautifully and passionate piece~ so well crafted

and wonderully penned my friend~Fran Marie

[C.R. Moore "Lasla"]

With pure intention...

And I'll whisper secrets of a Crimson Butterfly


excellent expression of passion I love it!!!
these lines and the last ones were most touching to me as they speak to the soul through love!

Travel deep within me

Through Darkness you shall discover

A glistening Light


Lover to Lover...



Flesh within Flesh...



Until our embers Seduce Eternity


A another impressive work dear friend BRAVO!!!
Lasla

[Mark D. Chevalier]

Well constructed and executed, with a steamy embrace that was seductive without dipping into descriptive erotica. I myself usually don't have the discipline. I normally do one or the other. This was sweet, and I applaud your skills.

Mark

[Pax Analog]

Fabulous! You make erotic love poetry of neon and steam! Must be an excellent muse -- and I have no doubt you are an exquisite muse in return. I truly love your combining the delicate beauty of the rose with the impact of a wild electric sign.