Colour in Gray

Colour in Gray

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

inspired from a song by Seal

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She gazes in determination

Through lights that surround

Mirror magnifying

Trail's sophistication...

Single sunbeam lazars

Bank of clouds...

Elemental romance

Solitary yet united with...

 

Earth

Air
Fire

Water 

 

Aphrodite's Secret

Becomes self-induced

Labour...

Somewhat...

Strange the feel

As she hears

Gray Dove cry

Iridescent rainbow of

Release...

 

Would he leave if she should fall?

See her light

Through the waning moon?

Kiss...

 

Champagne shadows

Of soft Doe eye

Smudges

Understanding life is choice

Pure love succeeds
That which is spoken

Energy Bound
Though Fantasy resists...

 

Love

Protection

Comfort

 

Strong fingertips

Gently heal lacerations

Subtlety probe 
Lost golden brown tresses

A past broken

Dreams omnipotent

Reach the sky

Emerging from...

 

The Power...

The Pleasure...

The Pain...

 

Of wanting a Ghost

 

 

 

© 2008 TamiViolet


Author's Note

TamiViolet
I hope the primary font is showing in gold as this is what I chose.

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So deeply passionate and intense as someone reaches for memories past for comfort today till life can be found again, at least that is what I find in this wonderful piece, I been there and can relate to it... love the structure for the breaks give it that emotional depth. as always though your are brilliant.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Another one of your beautiful pieces Apollonia! the picture drew me in, beautiful, and the words captured my atttention even more. The gold did show up, I love gold! and I like how you separate another paragraph of: earth, water, fire, air. ...a nice touch!!

You are a very poetic person, and have a way of taking us to another universe when you speak to us through your words. I loved reading this one. thank you!!

Kena

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very beautiful piece... ah life does have many shades of gray... not just black and white... its the gray that makes it fun and exciting sometimes...



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it was nice,lovely and passionate but it was in orange

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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