Colour in Gray

inspired from a song by Seal

 

 

 

 

 

She gazes in determination

Through lights that surround

Mirror magnifying

Trail's sophistication...

Single sunbeam lazars

Bank of clouds...

Elemental romance

Solitary yet united with...

 

Earth

Air
Fire

Water 

 

Aphrodite's Secret

Becomes self-induced

Labour...

Somewhat...

Strange the feel

As she hears

Gray Dove cry

Iridescent rainbow of

Release...

 

Would he leave if she should fall?

See her light

Through the waning moon?

Kiss...

 

Champagne shadows

Of soft Doe eye

Smudges

Understanding life is choice

Pure love succeeds
That which is spoken

Energy Bound
Though Fantasy resists...

 

Love

Protection

Comfort

 

Strong fingertips

Gently heal lacerations

Subtlety probe 
Lost golden brown tresses

A past broken

Dreams omnipotent

Reach the sky

Emerging from...

 

The Power...

The Pleasure...

The Pain...

 

Of wanting a Ghost

 

 

 

Author's Note

I hope the primary font is showing in gold as this is what I chose.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So deeply passionate and intense as someone reaches for memories past for comfort today till life can be found again, at least that is what I find in this wonderful piece, I been there and can relate to it... love the structure for the breaks give it that emotional depth. as always though your are brilliant.

[Angelic Darkness]

There is something fairy-taleish about this. The mood puts me in the
mind of a goddess...for she controls the emotions that are around.
The picture you added is just beautiful too. I tried to add a picture to
one of my poems, but couldn't figure it out....could you tell me how
it's done? AD

[Rylan Batten]

very nice presentation, very creative wording. I like this, keep it up

--Rylan

[R J Askew]

I don't know which of your moods I prefer...the full on, urgent erotic, or these more ethereal yearning type poems. This is at least the second of the latter type I've read recently and I think it is great. I've read it twice and it has a calming aura about it. Though yearning for a ghost... Is that what we all do in some ways? With the ghost being the perfection we dreamed about when we were 17. And the picture is alluring. I'm put in mind of the pre-raphelites by your poem and its presentation.

[Poetic Injustice]

I've had issues in the past with haunted ladies who masked such until I was enamored. But that's me. Very pretty indeed. =0)

[Mr. Lopez]

Your poem bounces majestically through my head like smoke dancing through air ever so slowly. What a great feel this one has ,leaving me with images of loves contimplations. Beautiful.

Mr.Lopez

[Reeses]

a ghost? I'm so caught there. Your writing sways my emotions as always.

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

It's funny i just found out who Seal was not to long ago. I love the poem, and i love the colors you used when writing this, it added that little touch!.

Danni J

[Bhavya Kaushik]

The first thing I saw in this writing was the pic, and it is really going so well with the feel of entire poem, simply awesome..Secondly the font and choice of colors have added an extra touch in it!
But no one can take the real content out of it and it is surely one of your masterpiece ...You know I often wonder how can you write so beautifully! You are really one of the most talented writers present is writerscafe :)

"A past broken
Dreams omnipotent
Reach the sky
Emerging from...


The Power...
The Pleasure...
The Pain.." Oh! this is really very heart wrenching and deep! For me these lines outstands the entire write...

Brilliant piece of writing!

[Dani California]

This is an incredible write A...

The entire piece had me spellbound,
however these lines in particular really
spoke to me...

"Pure love succeeds
That which is spoken

Energy Bound
Though Fantasy resists"

I enjoyed the layout and
color scheme as well,
it truly enhances your
words...

Beautiful work my friend....!

[Legion]

"but did you know, that when it snows, my eyes become......" :)

Love Seal and love the poem. The color shows well. Colors of the past wanted. Good work.