So deeply passionate and intense as someone reaches for memories past for comfort today till life can be found again, at least that is what I find in this wonderful piece, I been there and can relate to it... love the structure for the breaks give it that emotional depth. as always though your are brilliant.
Soooo beautiful. The power, the pleasure, the pain .. of wanting a ghost.
This is such a passionate poem and the use of mythic goddess adds to its charm.
Beautiful as a rainbow.. maybe more so.
Read again... and was moved again by the desire... intricately woven tapestry of longing threaded through your words. Sensual and rich, you create a vision of love and desire. Beautiful form and flow... haunting...
So deeply passionate and intense as someone reaches for memories past for comfort today till life can be found again, at least that is what I find in this wonderful piece, I been there and can relate to it... love the structure for the breaks give it that emotional depth. as always though your are brilliant.
oh but this trickles in such imagery i was not expecting the ending ...ii loved it...along with the title and the font...it was a sarcastic jab at the obvious and usual....but you took it completly different and i was a sucker all along
My breath has been taken away ...This reminds of the goddess,love,desires,and dreams..
I love the elemental representation illustrated here.
As always I am impressed by your words and enlightening my senses to a new hight.
I really enjoyed your piece, Apollonia...especially after reading it through once, then reading the "Kiss From a Rose" lyrics, then re-reading your poem. I like this line particularly: "...Champagne shadows...Of soft Doe eye...Smudges..." I also really like your attention to visual appeal and presentation, using font color to accentuate your words. Wonderful work, as always!
AWESOME, The picture is amazing and I love the colors. This flows so smoothly, and the imagery is wonderful (for want of a better word)... It's romantic yet sad, it's spellbinding. My favorite part was "The Power, The Pleasure, The pain........Of Wanting A Ghost", Bravo, absolutly awesome. Am looking forward to reading more of your writing soon. Congratulations on such an amazing piece. ;)