Secret Truth

inspired by my timeless lover

 

My diary is found

Beneath the ageless Oak

I weep not for you

Arrogance is a fool!

He broods in icy white

 

My shadow makes love

to another...

 

A dance unrehearsed

Shy secrets

Yearnings remain safely
Concealed deep in lines of

My hand as modesty seduces

 

We were lovers centuries ago

Old and new...

Forever...

Care for...

Respect

Admire

 

Love penetrates boundaries

 

A Healing touch

Explosive

Pure like moon water

Transforms shattered glass

Covets burning flesh

 

Kiss

Caress

Consume

Undress

 

He is the man I see
When I open my eyes...

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lalli]

wow!!!

EXPLOSIVLY POWERFUL... the way you personified arrogance, modesty, shadow, and love... *snap snap

apollonia, i gotta say 1 thing. This is my favorite poem i've ever read from you!
from the beginning word to the final syllable, this is a TRUE masterpiece.
One of the most unique ways i've read or seen to protray the desire for ones lover.

much love n respect

-Lalli

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautifully voiced, sensual write that seems timeless as your words carry the reader across the centuries. This is so wonderful to read, rich and deep and profoundly alive!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem and photos. Photos made words come alive. Thank you.
Coyote

[Poetic Injustice]

I missed this first time around. Very well done. Very well.

[Mr. Lopez]

I find that you have a genuine artistic quality to your work. You never "give up the ghost" yet paint such a vivid image for your readers to draw from. Excellent poem .

Mr.Lopez

[Jessica M.]

i love the image of your shadow making love to another,
it's definitely... poetic... haha :p

[Jessica Fox]

I thought that I had actually reviewed this, great poem seductive and sexy but also sweet

[Angelic Darkness]

This is a great poem. The words are magical, full of more to come.

Love these lines: A dance unrehearsed

Shy secrets
My hand as modesty seduces

Great visual...AD

[Periac]

app...a wonderful lament to the one who sounds perfect...and well described as others jealousy grows....great write

[desertraven]

seductive and sensual piece. nicely done.
Sandi

[Nicholas Hallows]

Seriously good! Captivating, atmospheric and seductive.
There is enough depth within the piece to ensure it can be read again and again.
It hits all the right spots!
Very nice