When Your Tears Fall�

tears, love

When your tears start to fall I'll be your tissue,
The softest solution to all your issues.
For I am that star you whole heartedly wished upon,
The one to make your worries and insecurities gone.
Dry your tears and know a better day is here,
No rain, no clouds, nothing to fear.
When you feel sad and there seems to be no cure,
I'll be that cool relying breeze that's pure.
For there can be no other like true love,
A feeling so right, we fit like a glove.
Cause I'm that star that doesn't burn up with time,
I'm the one that makes a romantic night shine.
So all those hopeless thoughts you have in your mind,
I'll make them go away, you'll see it with time.

 

Reviews

[Nish Nish the Fish]

i like this, it's really cute.
i like the concept, hence the entrance to my contest..lol
its very reassuring and who ever you wrote this for should be glad to have such a great friend :)
although i feel its incomplete, not "short" but i don't think you've finished what you're trying to say.
...hmm
all in all, its a nice poem. good job :)

[C. C. Burl]

Pretty, short. I can't wait until your book of poems come out . . . I'll have to order them into my library. I really enjoy your style.

I love this:
So all those hopeless thoughts you have in your mind,
I'll make them go away, you'll see it with time.