The Five Pillars: The Rise of Lohkum
A Book by Apebble
 A Fantasy Novel with similar scope to Tolkien's Middle Earth. I likely will not reach such greatness as him, but I hope to create a unique world of my own.  © 2016 Apebble
Author's Note
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Please note, many of this is first draft material. While you are free to comment for grammar, I already know I will need to look at a few things. Also, many areas will be modified for further detail and vocabulary. Though, if you have a particular area you like, hate, or want to see more about, please let me know.
I do ask that you not give any ideas. I'd like this world to be all from my own mind. If you suggest something, I won't use it out of that purpose, though it may be good.
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PS: look at the 'few things' before posting. It helps the reader concentrate on the story.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Grammar is a secondary requirement at present. Any errors present don't inhibit the presentation or .. read moreGrammar is a secondary requirement at present. Any errors present don't inhibit the presentation or readability insomuch that it would harm one's ability to comment on content or a more pertinent aspect...
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8 Years Ago
I disagree. Bad grammar really interrupts my focus. I've always maintained the GPS (Grammar, Punct.. read moreI disagree. Bad grammar really interrupts my focus. I've always maintained the GPS (Grammar, Punctuation and Spelling) should be good enough to be able to be ignored.
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8 Years Ago
And were the grammar bad enough to inhibit the reader to such an extent where the piece would become.. read moreAnd were the grammar bad enough to inhibit the reader to such an extent where the piece would become unreadable, I would agree. But it isn't...
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8 Years Ago
I find that it is.
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8 Years Ago
Then your standards are higher than I care to cater to. Feel free to leave at any time.
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8 Years Ago
--and I already did.
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Added on February 5, 2016
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Hi all :)
I go by apebble, but you can call me almost any variation of apebble you wish (peb, pebs, pebbles, ape, etc.)...just don't call me apple :P
As for myself as a writer: I write generally.. more..
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