Greenapple Mornings

Greenapple Mornings

A Poem by Christine
"

Just a little thing I wrote

"
my raft is bobbing along in my gray emptiness and you're
shrieking
at me and your onion breath is
the cold wind and the harsh bite of the
greenapple-mornings.
and my softly bobbing waves are throwing me at
your sharp rocks, peaks.
your vision of my future.
and the sun is shining and i feel like
i'm suffocating
all over again.

© 2011 Christine


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Christine
Sometimes, I make no sense. This is one of those.

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. makes sense to me ... it feels like someone's behaviour is very random ... sometimes loving ... and sometimes hurtful ... and the impact of that is not nice ... it happened to me ... and that's when i would suffocate despite the sun ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


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and the sun is shining and i feel like
i'm suffocating
all over again.

I liked these owrds, I can feel sense of the character here. This has good imagery in it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Well you used imagery alright (good job). It would be cool if this made sense.

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Added on April 26, 2010
Last Updated on September 26, 2011
Tags: Poem, Literature, Feelings, Scary, Emotional

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Christine
Christine

Seattle, WA



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