Paper TownsA Poem by ChristineQuick sonnet for my english class. I know it's not all that good, but give me feedback?
We blindly view the world through sheepdog bangs,
Hidden, hiding. Cage away secret fears Not stopping to see the birds,bees, and cranes. Indifferent to their grimy onyx tears. Too rushed, can't see the monster we are. Drowning out the sounds of the world's cry, damaged, see the perfection we've marred, ignoring the acid rain and gray sky. Watch the sunsets and smell the fresh air, for the day comes when the world crumbles down. And there will be only us to blame, care. And there will be no more of our plastic towns. Swish aside your deceitful bangs, see the light. Ignore our manufactured lies © 2010 ChristineAuthor's Note
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Added on April 26, 2010Last Updated on April 26, 2010 AuthorChristineSeattle, WAAboutedit: 9.21.11 I haven't been on in several months, I'm sorry about that, I'll try to be more active! I've been going through a rough patch lately and all my writing hasn't been all that decent... I.. more..Writing
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