My Goldiefish

A goldfish that swims in the streams,
A goldfish that swims in the lake,
As the streams are my veins,
As the lake is my heart

The goldiefish owns the lake in which she swims.
The goldiefish controls the flow of the streams.

The golden rays that radiate,
The shining that shows,
Shows how good this goldfish is.

With a grand personality,
And looks to match,

This goldiefish controls the flow of the streams,
And owns the the lake she swims in.

Goldiefish,

You have my heart, and my life.
Swim in your lake,
And among your streams,
As they welcome your loving embrace.

Reviews

[Aussie]

Ha. Cute. Tender and childish,very endearing.

[Erin Lee]

what i want to know? what does the goldfish do for the lake and streams that give her her very life? sounds a little unfair to me! i want to see the goldfish give something in return.

[Jasmarine]

Sounds like a love poem. it's cute but I laughed when you wrote 'Goldiefish', sorry it reminds me of my brothers.

I love it, hope there will be more :]