The Tessellated Expression in "Soothing Serenades"A Chapter by Anwer GhaniI will study the internal and the external type of tessellation in "Soothing Serenades" using the quantitative analytic approach which depends of the statistic and experimental findings and by this atPoetry is a mirror, and the text is a vehicle so the poetic text
is, in its essential existence, a big mirror. The mirrored existence is a
generalized phenomenon and there are degrees of transfiguration of things
according to the expressive mirrors by which they appear. Everything tries to
present in a full transfiguration state. Poetry as anything also tries to present
in a full transfiguration. The literary message also tries to present in a full
transfiguration by pressing on the author to express itself at every moment of
writing. Sometimes the idea takes several shapes to reach that goal. In
tessellated system, the message appears in several clothes; it repeats itself
in different textual figures. The texts in the tessellated writing are the
shapes, the clothes and the visages of the writer’s
message. So the tessellated system is a system of mirrors which is more complex
than the other types of writing (AG Jaber, The literary expression, Arabic edition 2017) From stylistic view, in the tessellated writing, there is a primary
title under which the poems sit, and there are secondary titles; the poems’ titles. While the secondary
title is basically thematic and reflects the poem’s
theme, the primary title describes the poems, the writing, or the universal
deep idea. Sometime the title of collection is the primary title and this type
of tessellation is the external tessellation in contrary to the internal
tessellation where the tessellation sections appeared in one poem and under one
title. Tessellation in writing represents the aim of the idea in its attempt to
transfigure. It becomes clear with the new understanding
of language and text that there are several aims in the writing; the authorial,
the textual and the reader related aims which they influence the text and its
final appearance. The most important aims in this complex system are the
textual and the authorial or ideal aims, and the relationship between them is
usually reciprocal (AG Jaber, The Literary Expression, 2017). The author always
tries to balance these aims and their seeking for full transfiguration which
prohibits any attempt to hide anyone of them or prevent its glory. While the intellectual aims try to
transfigure with full expression regardless the length of the text, the textual
aims try to express the ideas with a biggest reduction in the size of text. If
the author goes with intellectual conducting aim, the text will appear
relatively tall while if he goes with textual aim, the text will be so minimal.
But if the author makes a balance, he will produce a balanced text and the most
effective tool is the tessellated writing. The tessellated writing has many textual
features and artistic elements. Here, in this review I will try to trace the
tessellation features and its elements in the India poet Bhaskaranand Jha
Bhaskar’s poetry collection "Soothing Serenades". In the tessellated writing, the deep idea
and the principal affair have appeared in multiple expressional systems with
different deep and superficial textual structures which they always refer and
point to that deep idea and that principal affair. These different expressive
systems and by their unified target they behave like mirrors where each of them
is a mirror to the other and this is what we call "the mirror
language"(AG Jaber; Literary expression, 2017). The tessellated text has been divided into
many parts. For example, if it is a poem, it will be divided into multiple
poems, that is to say; the tessellated poem is a system of multiple poems in
one poem. If the division is so clear with secondary titles, this is the
external tessellation but if the division is not clear and the mirror paragraphs
are parts of one undivided poem, there will be the internal tessellation. I
will study the internal and the external type of tessellation in "Soothing
Serenades" using the quantitative analytic approach which depends of the
statistic and experimental findings and by this attitude, the quantitative
critique is a sold introduction to the literary science; "literology"
(A. Jaber; The Literary Expression, Arabic edition, 2017). Bhaskar is an Indian poet; his poetry
characterized by the high expressionism and a smooth symbolic writing with a
fast bounding speed. In his sixty two poems collection "Soothing
Serenades" a publishing of Authors press, New Delhi in 2018, Bhaskar has
used a very expressive system of tessellation which is the emotional tessellation
where the expressive mirrors are the feeling and the systems of emotions. In
"Soothing Serenades" we find every paragraph imitates the other
making a beautiful tessellated system. In fact, "Soothing Serenades" is
full with the ideal, thematic and philosophic elements but our study is purely
stylistic, so I will be away from any thematic or philosophic analysis and this
can be a matter for other studies. The quantitative critique can hold many
aspects of writing and in same time producing the tessellated critique but
here, we will confine on the stylistic aspect. In his poem "TO GODDESS OF
LOVE" ( Soothing Serenades, Bhaskar p29) we find a very obvious
tessellated system composed of three sections acting as mirrors; mirrors for
themselves and for the central and deep message: Section (`1): "Dispel the darkness of hatred From heart and mind of the ignorant
people And
burn all weeds of their impure and lurid desires" Section
(2): "Come and heal the global wound Of violence, lusts and all ailments
of hearts With comforting and curing touch of
divinity" Section
(3): "Replete
the world with your resplendent grandeur!" We
can see the pressure of the deep idea on the text, which is the seeking of
universal redress and change. Yes, the characters, the times, and the places
are different, but the deep message is one, and this is the tessellation
system. And although the paragraphs have a uniform deep idea transfiguring
clearly in each one but we can see the progression of transfiguration of that
idea. We can see that the power and the desire to change become more potent,
wider and deeper with the progression of the text. I had numbered the
paragraphs according to their chronological presence in the text and you can
see how the author transfers from a limited field of demand in the first
section where he wanted the change to occur in the (hearts of ignorant people),
but in the second section, the roof of the requests has been raised to involve indefinite (hearts) which is more
wider and universal than the field in section one; (the hearts of ignorant),
while in the third section the idea occurred in its full transfiguration to
request the change in all ( the world); everything in the world. Although
I thought that everything in the world is a rational creature and has a soul
and consciousness, I was keeping the pronouns of the irrationals to give the
symbolic tools their full transfiguration. The effect of personification of
irrational pronouns is more potent than the using of rational pronouns for the
irrational things, where it may be understood as a metaphoric use. In a
collective speaking; the sections have sought the redress and forming a
mirrored system in a tessellated space. Section
one... the redress and change. Section
two... the redress and change. Section
three... the redress and change. We
see that the same idea has transfigured in three different figures in one poem
with one title, so this system is an internal tessellation. But we saw the
difference in the intensity and the fullness of transfiguration of the deep
message, where it has begun limited then became wider and finally took its full
transfiguration. Section
(1); limited field (ignorant hearts... then section (2); more wider fields
(hearts)... then section(3); the widest field (all the world), where full
transfiguration has occurred. Limited
(1)…wider (2)…widest (3). We saw in the past lines that Bhaskar has used two expressional
tools to express his idea, or in more precise words we saw the deep ide has
used two tools to express itself in the text; the first one is the tessellation
system and the mirrored writing and the second tool is the progressive
transfiguration. But there is another expressive tool we can notice in the text
where we can see the progression in the immersion of the verbs which have been
used: Section (`1): Dispel, Section (2): Heal, Section
(3): Replete. As
you see, from the view of immersion and harmony with the idea of redress and
change; the first verb (dispel) suffers from a degree of estrangement while the
second verb (heal) has a more familiarity and harmony but the third verb
(Replete) possesses all the familiarity and the harmony. So there is a
progressive expression in the usage of the verbs in the poem. At
this point, we can refer to two interesting things; first; that this harmony
between the progressive transfiguration of the ideal expression and the
progressive transfiguration of the verbal expression has produced an internal
and deep music, and the second thing is that this action reflected the distinct
literary experience of the author; Bhaskar and whether this action has occurred
by conscious or unconscious activity, it is finally the result of the
discriminate artistic experience of Bhaskar which is transfiguring and
expressing itself in the text. And we know that literature is but
transfiguration and expression. In the poem "OH, ETERNAL
LOVE!" (Soothing Serenades, Bhaskar, p30), a very obvious and expressive
tessellated system has existed and it composed from three sections: Section (1): Let me be lost In your ethereal being Merged Section (2): Dissolved Like sugar into the depth Of the ocean Blissful Section (3): Let me be Far away From the weary And dreary times Of life. In fact I have noticed from my
previous experiences in Arabic tessellated poetry that most tessellated poetic
systems composed of three sections (The Literary Expression, A Jaber 2017). So
it has been built in my mind an idea that the tessellated poems usually ended
in the third section and if the poem has appeared longer with more sections
there will be a new and different tessellated system. In fact we don’t need much speech to
show that the adjectives (lost. dissolved and far away) are not just
expressions of same idea but they belong to one meaning field in the language
system. It is clear that language in the universal conscious system has been
divided into fields of meaning and although the number of these fields is huge
but the process of language and communication is very effective and fast and in
insensible moment the brain can reposit every word into its field. There were metaphoric usages on the
primary verbs in this poem, and the final idea which expresses itself in the
text is the union with the eternal, as the title of poem has expressed
"OH, ETERNAL LOVE" Section (1): lost / In your ethereal
being Section (2): Dissolved Like sugar
into the depth Section (3): Far away /From the
weary /And dreary times In this poem we can find all the
previous expressive systems, and this is also a mirror. We should remember and
emphasize that there is nothing in the writing can happen just with coincidence
and without purpose but the fact is that everything in writing is happening for
a purpose; either conscious or conscious, and the repetition of same manner of
deep structure of expression has pointed towards the style of the author, the
genric and stylistic space of his writing and the transfiguration of the
subconscious factors. In "OH, ETERNAL LOVE",
there is a tessellated system with mirrored writing: (1): lost / In your ethereal being… seeking
the union and peace (2): Dissolved Like sugar into the
depth… seeking the union and peace (3): Far away /From the weary /And dreary
times… seeking the union and peace And when we notice that the union is
with an eternal, deep and gladdening presence, we know that the union is with
eternal peace. So, the tessellated system here is
so obvious and the mirrored writing is also clear, where every section is a
mirror to the deep message and to the other sections. In addition to the tessellation,
we can see the progression of transfiguration
of the idea where it started with lost in the ethereal presence, which
represents an indirect expression then proceeded to more directivity where the
dissolve in the depth (Of the ocean / Blissful …. That soothes / My soul) and
lastly ended in a very direct message (Far away /From the weary /And dreary
times). The author, or in precise term the
text transfers from a less direct state of explanation into a more direct one
and then finally ends in a very direct expressive and this system represents a
progressive transfiguration of the deep idea and the central message. Beside this progression all of us
can feel the other progressive system which is represented by the degree of
existence and its solidity. And I said "all of us" because the system
of feelings precedes the intellectual analysis and usually does not need it or
the awareness to present, so the feelings can present and in a potent form
without clear awareness or explanation. We can see clearly that the piece has
stated with a faint existence (ethereal) then transferred to a more sold
(dissolve in the depth) and then to a very high degree of solidity in existence
(the weary and dreary times). Although the reactions to these different
existences are different in negativity and positivity, this progression in
existence represents a progression in expression. And although the progression
in expression is a feature of transfiguration progression but due to its
independency in emotional effect it represents an isolated system of expression
which mainly depends on feelings and not on intellectual analysis. This point
is so important which can be summarized by one sentence that while the
recognition of the progression of deep idea transfiguration needs intellectual
analysis, the realization of the progression of the expressive elements can
occur without intellectual analysis where it depends on the emotional
response and awareness. That is to say
as there is an intellectual awareness there is an emotional awareness. We
recognized the progression of transfiguration of the idea (the eternal union)
in ""OH, ETERNAL LOVE" by intellectual analysis and this is the
intellectual awareness but we realized the progression of the existence and its
related expression before the analysis and this was occurring by the emotional
awareness and this represents the nonintellectual aspect of beauty and
aesthetics. From the above observations and when
we returned to the title of the collection (Soothing Serenades; straight from
the heart, a collection of love poems" with its smooth penetration, we can
conclude that Bhaskar has a peculiar style in his disclosure and in introducing
himself where he can reach full transfiguration of his message and his idea by
a smooth and progressive manner and this is the attitude of the wise and quite
man. In fact we can talk more and more
about Bhaskar’s art in his "Soothing
Serenades" and there are many aspects to review and analysis, but our
quantitative stylistic approach can put the keys in the hand of the reader to
inter the aesthetic world of "Soothing Serenades" with confidence,
and we should always remember that the aesthetic reading which primarily seeks
the feelings is different from the semantic reading which primarily seeks the meaning.
The themes and the semantic elements are just a vehicle of the aesthetic
elements; the actual and the essential constituents of literature. © 2018 Anwer Ghani |
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Added on May 10, 2018 Last Updated on May 10, 2018 Tags: tessellated expression, Soothing Serenades AuthorAnwer GhaniHILLA, Babil, IraqAboutAnwer Ghani is an Iraqi poet, writer and artist. He was born in 1973 in Babylon. His name has appeared in many literary magazines and anthologies and he has won many prizes; one of them is the "World .. more..Writing
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