Give us

My wish

Give us what we deserve.

Don't let our sweat hit the earth with no meaning to it.

See us work tirelessly seeking our goal.

We are not afraid to do it but of not having a reason to do it.

We do not ask for wealth, fame or riches but what we deserve.

Give us a feedback, a reply.

We are pedalling the cycle of life to move forward.

And we ask for nothing but the completion of a cycle.

We ask for nothing but what we deserve.

Reviews

[marilyn 1225]

great poem i love the last three sentences, especially
we are pedalling the cycle of life to move forward

[Anvaya]

Glad you enjoyed my poem. :-)

[¿]

A brownie point of society caught here.....indeed we should get what we deserve.....but hope the society also keeps the pace with us!
Terrific read😊

[Anvaya]

True, we should get all we deserve.
Thanks for reading through. 😊

[Yari Garcia]

This is beautiful, and I love the message behind it. The way I interpret it, I definitely agree with the sentiment.

Yari

[Anvaya]

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.