Quiet A-loud

Quiet A-loud

A Poem by Anushka joshi
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A strong feeling ... to discard all the negativity and frustrations ...

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Quiet A-loud 
I wanna shout 
Quiet A-loud ...

Under the ocean of my hell 
I wanna 
Exhale out all my breath , all around ,
My brain ... and expel all out ,
Quiet A-loud 

Above the heaven ...
Far beyond my expectations 
My frustrations 
Wanna crate it all and , 
explode all out ...
Quiet A-loud

                                        -Anushka Joshi ...

© 2020 Anushka joshi


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Anushka joshi
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The best part of this poem is your inventive contrasting title-phrase, repeated thru-out to strong effect. Quiet-a-loud reminds me of how I feel when my wilderness solitude is made ugly with noisy power tools & four-wheelers tearing up & down the hills loudly. People don't respect quiet. They come from towns & cities where there's always background noise & they cannot enjoy the outdoors without making noise like shooting guns a hundred times in a row. It makes me as frustrated as this poem sounds. But I also realize your poem is about the public discourse these days, with everyone complaining & criticizing & disrespecting others. It's so bad out there, I just want to be alone in my peaceful life without all that noise! Nicely original way to express what we are all feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you ma'am 😊 for understanding my feelings so greatly



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This one is extremely relatable! I too get such feelings, especially when I am feeling low. Great write!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

1 Year Ago

Thank you ❤️
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Devansh Shekhar Shukla

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome!
Everytime I read this , I love this

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emotions are clear and words can be felt. But i can't help but notice that wanna was repeatedly used which in some way can be prevented as it spoils the fluidity of the poem and it is not taken in the way it should and also the main subject is neglected...Overall it is a gr8 work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A frustrated outcry making itself heard through your splendid use of an inspiring double-edged title. An engaging read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you ma'am


I imagine most folk have days when they feel much the same.. nicely penned my friend :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

So nice of you to call me your friend I like such kind of persons who are so friendly and this is su.. read more
Neville

4 Years Ago


my pleasure,

Neville
The best part of this poem is your inventive contrasting title-phrase, repeated thru-out to strong effect. Quiet-a-loud reminds me of how I feel when my wilderness solitude is made ugly with noisy power tools & four-wheelers tearing up & down the hills loudly. People don't respect quiet. They come from towns & cities where there's always background noise & they cannot enjoy the outdoors without making noise like shooting guns a hundred times in a row. It makes me as frustrated as this poem sounds. But I also realize your poem is about the public discourse these days, with everyone complaining & criticizing & disrespecting others. It's so bad out there, I just want to be alone in my peaceful life without all that noise! Nicely original way to express what we are all feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you ma'am 😊 for understanding my feelings so greatly
Nicely written and displayed true emotions. A relatable poem for many :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your words riya
Aj.
Riya

4 Years Ago

Welcome :-)
Riya

4 Years Ago

Welcome :-)
Ma'am you are really very good at your writings !! I am strongly influenced by your thoughts .

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very strong reflection of emotions. The title is quiet apt to let the feel and the of frustration come out. Beautifully penning.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much ma'am

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Tags: # frustrate, #expel, #feeling, #negativity, #positive, #strong, #aloud, #quiet

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