The best part of this poem is your inventive contrasting title-phrase, repeated thru-out to strong effect. Quiet-a-loud reminds me of how I feel when my wilderness solitude is made ugly with noisy power tools & four-wheelers tearing up & down the hills loudly. People don't respect quiet. They come from towns & cities where there's always background noise & they cannot enjoy the outdoors without making noise like shooting guns a hundred times in a row. It makes me as frustrated as this poem sounds. But I also realize your poem is about the public discourse these days, with everyone complaining & criticizing & disrespecting others. It's so bad out there, I just want to be alone in my peaceful life without all that noise! Nicely original way to express what we are all feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
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4 Years Ago
Thank you ma'am 😊 for understanding my feelings so greatly
emotions are clear and words can be felt. But i can't help but notice that wanna was repeatedly used which in some way can be prevented as it spoils the fluidity of the poem and it is not taken in the way it should and also the main subject is neglected...Overall it is a gr8 work.
I imagine most folk have days when they feel much the same.. nicely penned my friend :)
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4 Years Ago
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Aj
The best part of this poem is your inventive contrasting title-phrase, repeated thru-out to strong effect. Quiet-a-loud reminds me of how I feel when my wilderness solitude is made ugly with noisy power tools & four-wheelers tearing up & down the hills loudly. People don't respect quiet. They come from towns & cities where there's always background noise & they cannot enjoy the outdoors without making noise like shooting guns a hundred times in a row. It makes me as frustrated as this poem sounds. But I also realize your poem is about the public discourse these days, with everyone complaining & criticizing & disrespecting others. It's so bad out there, I just want to be alone in my peaceful life without all that noise! Nicely original way to express what we are all feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Thank you ma'am 😊 for understanding my feelings so greatly