Frozen ...

Frozen ...

A Poem by Anushka joshi
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When we feel like Frozen ...

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Frozen ... 
Will it ever be possible
 To combat and trounce Our notion . 
Will I ever overcome
 that state of Frozen...

© 2020 Anushka joshi


Author's Note

Anushka joshi
Please read and let me know about your notion regarding this ...

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one must never lose hope as no one knows the god's will. Prominent feelings are seen though . I like strong poems also my notion will be that everything is possible if he wants and it is going to be impossible even though how much u try also here our will and mindset comes in act as we are what our thoughts make us....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aradhana

4 Years Ago

Ohhhh..nhi qki Maharashtra me joshi mostly brahmin marathi hote h 🤔😐😀
Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

hmm bhi brahmin pahadi h uttarakhand k
Aradhana

4 Years Ago

Ohh I don't know much abt it. Just heard stories from my mom.. btw how is it there?? Weather little .. read more



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................ this is really cool & colder than permafrost :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

1 Year Ago

Ohh !! I wonder why I have ❄️ cold.
I like the brevity of this and the message seems to be of someone feeling all alone and longing to feel warmth again. Personally I would erase the word 'from' in the final line and simply have it as 'Will I ever overcome that state of Frozen...'

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Okay , yes you are right sir . I always welcome the suggestions from all . If you find any correctio.. read more
Whenever I think of being frozen, I think of being frozen with fear. That is far worse than feeling cold.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words ma'am .
In India recently we were now days celebrating a festiv.. read more
Chris Shaw

4 Years Ago

Your English is good. No need to apologise and I love to hear about all things Indian. All good wish.. read more
Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much ma'am
one must never lose hope as no one knows the god's will. Prominent feelings are seen though . I like strong poems also my notion will be that everything is possible if he wants and it is going to be impossible even though how much u try also here our will and mindset comes in act as we are what our thoughts make us....

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aradhana

4 Years Ago

Ohhhh..nhi qki Maharashtra me joshi mostly brahmin marathi hote h 🤔😐😀
Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

hmm bhi brahmin pahadi h uttarakhand k
Aradhana

4 Years Ago

Ohh I don't know much abt it. Just heard stories from my mom.. btw how is it there?? Weather little .. read more
So strong feelings in this poem I t took some time for me to understand but according to my notions yes it is possible

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 15, 2020
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Anushka joshi
Anushka joshi

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