When the fear dares ...

when our fears dare out to dominate us...

When the fear dares...

At the extreme peak of life and death ,

when the fear dares to dominate us with it's clumsy efforts ,

The path takes an U - turn to break the fist of dread moths .

Enjoining us , makes immense efforts to take over our empire ,

But the one , the king of that empire 

Has timeless efforts makes him win his empire once again ,

Be the king of your own empire or lose it eventually ,

Don't let your fears to take over it all ,

Instead create the history to have a victory over that war.

 

                                   -ANUSHKA JOSHI.

Author's Note

Please let me know about your perspective regarding this ...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

fear of taking life by the horns can keep us from becoming that which we have the chance to be.
I like the message...so much.
4th line..i read as "take" and 7th line as "lose"--
but a very thoughtful piece..as we often seem to be at war with what we might make of ourselves.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much sir for your review and advice ... I remembered I wrote 'take' but my phone sometimes auto corrects unnecessarily ... and I didn't noticed it .. Thanks Mr. jac

[Sairaa ...]

Strong emotions ... I love your writings indeed

[Sairaa ...]

Yes don't let your fears surround you and destroy yourself you are the only one who could help yourself
Great !!!

[Unspoken poet]

Wow, so very powerful, I really enjoyed this and it's intriguing

[Anushka joshi]

Yes Kay .... Thank you for your kind reveiws💗

[Karmee]

Love that last stanza, so true. Never let your fears take a hold of you. I know that is hard to do at times.

[Anushka joshi]

Yes , you catch it right way
thanks

[msharma]

Amazingly written . The last stanza is portraying the essence of the whole piece. A thoughtful work indeed. God bless.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ma'am 😊😊

[Rye]

Don't let your fears to take over it all ,
Instead create the history to have a victory over that war.

I really love this part, fact is that it is so true, This is wonderful.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ma'am for your kind review