My journey and Me...

A poetry to express the lifespan of time... Hope you all will love it...

My journey and Me...

Far away to no extent ,

Endless is my journey ,

Endless is me.

Till the doom ,

Dark or gloom ,

Endless is my journey ,

Endless is me.

Step out your word with me

You will not run  ,

opportunities will catch you ,

you will see.

Challenge is to find a teacher than me ,

As much you climb learn a new lesson with me.

I am powerful so can ,

change you , your personality , power and glory ,

I can take you to the

railway of galaxy ,

or gnaw it every.

My breeze of journey ,

can blow you all ,or give you a hope ,

to build up a fresh dune.

With the word in my 3 hands at all , 

Endless is my journey ,

Endless is me...

                      

                                             -ANUSHKA JOSHI

Author's Note

Please let me know how was it...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i see this as a metaphor...it is the mind....what it can do, how powerful it can be, how far it can journey even when we are standing perfectly still....or reading something like a poem...that takes "us lands away" as Emily Dickinson wrote...powerful indeed.
should we fear it? I wonder...

[Anushka joshi]

Yes , Thank you so much sir ... you related it as I imagined .. actually this poem has one more line ...I don't know why I skipped it but ... the line was;
I am not powerful at all as you ,
It's you who yourself made me glorious even .
this line was proximal to ; to the railway of galaxy ,or gnaw it every

[poetgurl]

This is really good, your journey is where ever you plant your feet. This is really good as well as powerful.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you for your kind attention...you got my feelings a right way Ang ... I like your point of thinking

[poetgurl]

aww thanks. I hope you have a wonderful day.

[Hercules94]

Great work!!! (They will not let me post this review unless it has 25 letters, I don't know what to write anymore, sorry for this useless extension)

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much