Name - A rough sketch...

A poem dedicated to the one who want to live himself...

Name - A rough sketch

I wanna live myself,

I wanna feel myself.

Fed up of all the world at moment,

Wanna world of full of comments.

I'll have my name of fame,

Either mine or my.

And with me my connectives would experience it too.

That is my dream when ,

I grow up to myself  ,

and for myself and for my...(Name)...

    

                                                             -ANUSHKA JOSHI

Author's Note

Hey guys!! How you find this one??

Reviews

[AJNJ]

"Either mine or my." - how do I find this? I find this brilliant in a word. This is a breakthrough in English poetry! Mark my words. You'll be a trailblazer soon. You'll have your "name of fame" and with you your "connectives" will experience it too lol. Go on writing such fantastic, eye-watering poetry! I am sure the geniuses on this website will soon descend on this masterpiece with appropriate praise and awe.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much...So nice of you

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

I like it, both the writing style and the theme. Keep writing.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you 😊

[Karmee]

Making a name for our self can be challenging at times. I believe we make a name for ourselves from the kindness we give outward.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you for your kind review

[msharma]

Well penned. You are sketching varied emotions with different colors. Keep writing.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you ma'am

[Dave Brown]

A great start to a brilliant career

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much sir... 🙏🏻🙏🏻

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i especially like "grow up to myself...and for myself and for my name"---
i think making the name will come eventually, but the process of getting there is most important.

[Anushka joshi]

yes... Mr.jac you'r right ... on yours ... I agree

[Phill Oz O'fee]

An interesting piece celebrating one's individuality - well done! :-)

[Anushka joshi]

Thanks a lot... yes.. I too love to celebrate my individuality

[Hercules94]

Great😁!!! Made me smile when I was reading it

[Anushka joshi]

oh!! really ...I am glad to make you smile