Name - A rough sketch...

A poem dedicated to the one who want to live himself...

Name - A rough sketch

I wanna live myself,

I wanna feel myself.

Fed up of all the world at moment,

Wanna world of full of comments.

I'll have my name of fame,

Either mine or my.

And with me my connectives would experience it too.

That is my dream when ,

I grow up to myself  ,

and for myself and for my...(Name)...

    

                                                             -ANUSHKA JOSHI

Author's Note

Hey guys!! How you find this one??

Reviews

[AJNJ]

"Either mine or my." - how do I find this? I find this brilliant in a word. This is a breakthrough in English poetry! Mark my words. You'll be a trailblazer soon. You'll have your "name of fame" and with you your "connectives" will experience it too lol. Go on writing such fantastic, eye-watering poetry! I am sure the geniuses on this website will soon descend on this masterpiece with appropriate praise and awe.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much...So nice of you

[AYVID N]

Its indeed wonderful to grow for oneself and find oneself and one's own place under the sun. To not depend on anybody for inner joy. I'm getting there now but blessed are those who accomplish this much earlier in life. This is such a relevant and well written poem!

[Anushka joshi]

I am glad you understood my words. I used words like fame here, people see it as something very negative and something that only greedy people look for, although I didn't literally mean the word fame here but still I can't see why it has to be so bad just because some couldn't have it the right way.
Also this was written when I was in 7th standard ( a kid ). I was a new writer and had no idea about it but here we are and this is the most viewed poem of mine where I still don't have any clear idea as what interpretations are being taken away from this piece

[emmajoygreen]

Discovering a place in the world is everyone's choice but, depends on how you try to find it. Ambition in wise hands is good and great, but treading on other's shoulders or hurting others in the process is never worthy; unkindness to other people to achieve status earns little or no applause! Your writing is positive and concise, hope it serves you well.. in time.

[Anushka joshi]

I wrote this in a state of utmost confusion myself and also when I was very small. I was going through my first ever diary and found this. So I posted this and this always reminds me of young Anushka juggling words in her mind and trying to make some meaning out of it :)

[Chris Shaw]

Fame isn't everything. It comes at a price. Those who have it often aren't happy with it. I think I would rather stay in the shadows. That's where your poem led me Anuska.

Chris

[Anushka joshi]

Yeah , actually yes but just next to the fame line I wrote either mine or my .... That means basically I want my writings to have a name not necessarily my name attached with them .... It can be or not but what's important is people should read and should be familiar with my works .... Like someone wrote this , don't know who but thats good
Thanks
Aj ....

[Robert Haigh]

I suppose different people want different things from their writing. I had poems published between 1995 and 2010, but I then stopped submitting poems for publication. I write mainly for me, and don't care about any possible fame. We have to be true to ourselves. I only share about two-thirds of the poems I write.

[Anushka joshi]

The meaning of success and fame is different for everyone .... For me it's everyone to notice my work or like my name in the field of writing .... Not just money .... But it's okay e everyone takes it differently...
Thanks 😊 .

[light and ashes]

If the thing you desire most for your life is fame, then you will be miserable.

[Anushka joshi]

I am sorry to say but maybe you don't have a pessimistic or open mind , here fame doesn't mean the real fame but it means the respect one desires in his work and the bucket list and his reputation in the eyes of his own ... 😊😊

[Neville]

......... rough sketches rarely give an accurate depiction of the subject they are meant to convey ... rough sketches are generally incomplete or interrupted ... I would like to consider the finished article :)

[Anushka joshi]

Sure ... Thank you

[Aradhana]

Growing for our own self is a very striking point and of course one must think of oneself and try to grow up and all that stuff...But always one must remember that food for one can be poison for others and growth of weed is a growth and growth of hibiscus is also a growth only..The factor that who is desirable decides ones life.....Also traces of this can be seen in charles darwin's famous law law of natural selection...Strong poems are indeed needed and for those who underestimate themselves self praise is must for sure..

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you for your golden words .... May I know which country you hail from ?
Aj

[Aradhana]

Well , i am from India. Mumbai🤗

[Anxiety]

I love this it's raw,powerful, and I can feel the emotion

[Sairaa ...]

Wow!! really very heart touching . they are not just the words I can feel them as well . very very influential writing . keep it up ...
-sairaa