Name - A rough sketch...

Name - A rough sketch...

A Poem by Anushka joshi
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A poem dedicated to the one who want to live himself...

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Name - A rough sketch
I wanna live myself,
I wanna feel myself.

Fed up of all the world at moment,
Wanna world of full of comments.

I'll have my name of fame,
Either mine or my.
And with me my connectives would experience it too.

That is my dream when ,
I grow up to myself  ,
and for myself and for my...(Name)...
    
                                                             -ANUSHKA JOSHI

© 2020 Anushka joshi


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Anushka joshi
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"Either mine or my." - how do I find this? I find this brilliant in a word. This is a breakthrough in English poetry! Mark my words. You'll be a trailblazer soon. You'll have your "name of fame" and with you your "connectives" will experience it too lol. Go on writing such fantastic, eye-watering poetry! I am sure the geniuses on this website will soon descend on this masterpiece with appropriate praise and awe.

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much...So nice of you



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Its indeed wonderful to grow for oneself and find oneself and one's own place under the sun. To not depend on anybody for inner joy. I'm getting there now but blessed are those who accomplish this much earlier in life. This is such a relevant and well written poem!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

6 Months Ago

I am glad you understood my words. I used words like fame here, people see it as something very nega.. read more
Discovering a place in the world is everyone's choice but, depends on how you try to find it. Ambition in wise hands is good and great, but treading on other's shoulders or hurting others in the process is never worthy; unkindness to other people to achieve status earns little or no applause! Your writing is positive and concise, hope it serves you well.. in time.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

10 Months Ago

I wrote this in a state of utmost confusion myself and also when I was very small. I was going throu.. read more
Fame isn't everything. It comes at a price. Those who have it often aren't happy with it. I think I would rather stay in the shadows. That's where your poem led me Anuska.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Anushka joshi

2 Years Ago

Yeah , actually yes but just next to the fame line I wrote either mine or my .... That means basical.. read more
I suppose different people want different things from their writing. I had poems published between 1995 and 2010, but I then stopped submitting poems for publication. I write mainly for me, and don't care about any possible fame. We have to be true to ourselves. I only share about two-thirds of the poems I write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Anushka joshi

2 Years Ago

The meaning of success and fame is different for everyone .... For me it's everyone to notice my wor.. read more
If the thing you desire most for your life is fame, then you will be miserable.

Posted 3 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

3 Years Ago

I am sorry to say but maybe you don't have a pessimistic or open mind , here fame doesn't mean the r.. read more


......... rough sketches rarely give an accurate depiction of the subject they are meant to convey ... rough sketches are generally incomplete or interrupted ... I would like to consider the finished article :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

3 Years Ago

Sure ... Thank you
Growing for our own self is a very striking point and of course one must think of oneself and try to grow up and all that stuff...But always one must remember that food for one can be poison for others and growth of weed is a growth and growth of hibiscus is also a growth only..The factor that who is desirable decides ones life.....Also traces of this can be seen in charles darwin's famous law law of natural selection...Strong poems are indeed needed and for those who underestimate themselves self praise is must for sure..

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Anushka joshi

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your golden words .... May I know which country you hail from ?
Aj
Aradhana

4 Years Ago

Well , i am from India. Mumbai🤗
I love this it's raw,powerful, and I can feel the emotion

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow!! really very heart touching . they are not just the words I can feel them as well . very very influential writing . keep it up ...
-sairaa

Posted 4 Years Ago



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