Happy Valentines my love

Random thoughts

I try to be strong, I try to be calm,

But hidden somewhere is the void you left,

I show as if I have moved on,

But somewhere I always wait for you to come back,

I try to keep myself busy all the time to avoid your thoughts,

But somewhere I always think about you,

I try to act as if I don't care,

But somewhere I wish you are happy all the time,

Things changed so fast,

Our egos drifted us apart,

But somewhere I havent forgotten that smile,

Those late night calls and those endless talks,

I revisit those times again and again,

I read those replies you never sent,

I wish I could get a chance to clear all the misunderstandings,

I wish I could get a chance to show how much you still mean to me,

Or I wish I could become strong enough to forget you.

Things change, times change but memories never fade,

Those moments I still cherish,

Forgetting those time will need lot of shove,

But for now only thing I want to say is "Happy Valentines" my love.

Author's Note

After a long I have written something. I hope you will like it. Criticism is welcome anyway.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

egos tend to do that...such an affectionate write...a couple of the longest lines might be broken down a little to avoid feeling cumbersome...but i also love the last line...and the sentiment is strong here.

And those misunderstandings are so hard to clear up...we can soften them a bit...but both sides feel a little unsure...if we can accept each other, flaws and all...we can love unconditionally.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you for the kind words Jacob Sir. Thanks for your kind feedback, will try to edit it soon. Yes I agree with you completely. Egos often create a gap which is very hard to fill.

[zunie frost]

i really love the last line how it says happy valentines !! it's really great such romantic !! lovely write

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind words :)

[Solar]

'But somewhere I wish you are happy all the time,'
That is the important message

[after all it is but for the love of the Self that the Other is loved, as said in better words by Sage Yajnyavalkya]

[CA Anurag Sharma]

This is all we want for the people we love and care. Thank you so much for reading it :)

[Mary Helda]

All so beautiful and emotional,i wish your love could read this..i am pretty sure she wouldnt resist the beauty of this piece and love in this poem...

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thanks for the kind words Mary Helda. Thank you so much for reading this :)

[Mary Helda]

You are welcome:-)