The endless space to be conquered

Just a random thoughts tied in a poem

They say that my life is destroyed,

They say my life has been ruined to ashes,

They say a loser like me should end his life,

Should i believe them and end it all,

Or should i give it another chance?

I am down at my back,

They are laughing at me,

They are cursing me,

But only thing i can see is the open sky,

The unconquered endless space in front of me,

Tell them that I have fallen and not died,

Tell them that I sill have in me to survive,

Age is just a number for me till my passion is alive,

Warrior I have been and warrior i will die,

My body might give up but my soul won't,

I will get up again and fight,

From the ruins of my past, I will build a new life,

From the debris of my dreams, I will create a future which will be mine,

Now that I have seen the worst,

I am ready to be at my best,

I wont give up, happen what may,

I will stand again to fight.

Author's Note

criticism welcomed

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Now that I have seen the worst,
I am ready to be at my best,
I wont give up, happen what may,
I will stand again to fight."
Can never give-up or give-in. I liked the above lines. Positive and strong. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Saddam]

Age is just a number for me till my passion is alive,
Warrior I have been and warrior i will die,
My body might give up but my soul won't,
I will get up again and fight.

Its great thought.
Love this and philosophical write. Can Inspire anyone.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Saddam :)

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Well done!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much M'am :)

[ANTO]

A tale of the indomitable human spirit told using the inner voice, Anurag. Well penned.
its not how many times we get knocked down but how many time we get back up that defines us.

Once we hit the bottom the only..... way is UP
:))

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Very well said ANTO.... to get up we need courage and spirit.... thanks for your kind words my dear friend :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Ahaaan, that's the great spirit one should have. World just want to have a reason to laugh at us, to discourage us. But in this Poem I feel the spirit that's in You and you can do anything as long as you don't give up, you can prove everyone wrong, who laughs or who called you destroyed. We can make our life better, the choices are in our hands. We can prove everyone wrong. And really as long as the passion is alive, age is just a number, really just a number. I loved your passion. And I truly enjoyed it, truly inspiring Poem! Keep writing.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the wonderful review....and I agree with you completely....thanks a lot :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are welcome dear Poet :)

[sapna sagar]

well written anurag.....ur expression r too good......

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sapna :)

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
never say die attitude, I really enjoyed this piece:)
I wrote a similar piece called Fight!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir.. will surely read your work...thanks for your kind review though :)