To all the respected ladies

This is not to offend anyone... I apologize in advance if it did

Confused souls they seem,

To understand them is the toughest thing,

If you try to be sweet to them, then you are flirting,

If you dont then you are arrogant,

To deal with them be ready to deal with their egos first,

Learn to say sorry even at their faults,

Dont try to say a word even when they are wrong,

Even your valid points will dig you deep into useless argument,

But once you touch their heart,

They will become your best friend,

All lives start from them,

They are mentally and emotionally more strong,

That I have to admit,

We cant live without them, we all know,

Mother is the home minister of the house,

Daughters are the lovely dolls,

Sisters are the best friends one can have,

Our lives anchor on them,

All the respected ladies are the integral force of this world.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Well I won't say that the first part is wrong projection or such, because I myself tend to see girls turning into that kinda person all around me. But I would like to add that in any genuine relationship, these petty things rarely happens or matters. And these are also the signs that the girl in general, described in the first half, is immature.
Other than that I really liked the contradictory connotation.
Very well penned.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

The idea was not to offend anyone. This is based on my experiences in life. Anyway thanks for your kind review :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

No offense taken. You are welcome.

[mou]

if the thoughts are well put in mind then why these type of thoughts (upto 8 line) appear..but anyway something new

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Humour is the most difficult thing to write, i tried to not to cross the lines of being offensive. Anyway thanks for your kind words. :)

[mou]

Absolutely,humor is difficult to express.But poetic world stays away from offensive thought but may have an air of complain.Anyway everyone has their own thoughts.

[Riddhi]

Really nice poem and yes another great work...I am a girl but yes i do agree with the first part of your poem!!!!and the way you told their importance made this poem even more beautiful...Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Glad you liked first part too and agree with it. Thanks for you kind review :)

[Solar]

'To deal with them be ready to deal with their egos first' seems to be a common human failing.

'integral force of this world' truly sums up the 'shakti' aspect.

The point of view of the poem evolves and finally resolves the contradictions.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

You got it right... thanks for your kind review :)

[Solar]

You're welcome!
I will appreciate your feedback on my writings!

[Saddam]

Mother is the home minister of the house,
Daughters are the lovely dolls,
Sisters are the best friends one can have,
Our lives anchor on them,

Reality it is. Pure and right. Great one friend.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much dear friend :)

[Saddam]

Most welcome brother...

[nazia]

Absolutely amazing. Loved both the parts of the poem. the one with flaws and the one with qualities... Thank you so much for writing such a lovely tribute :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

I am glad that you liked the first part too :) .... thank you so much for your kind review :)

[Anannya Saraswat]

Truely said anurag... you really described ladies well... best lines ........
"But once you touch their heart,they will become your best friends"
Good work..keep it up:-)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Anannya :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"Mother is the home minister of the house,
Daughters are the lovely dolls,
Sisters are the best friends one can have,
Our lives anchor on them,
All the respected ladies are the integral force of this world."
Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Excellent in all aspects...Bravo, sir. ...

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir... glad that you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep.You are welcome...:)........

[Emily]

I love the meaning of it!
Well done!!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much M'am :)