A message by paper and pen

This has been inspired from the writings of one of my favorite poet..... Deepika...thanks for the idea.. :)

My pen and paper fought one night,

"People use you and get you out of their sight,

You end up being a history or a waste in the dustbin,

You are nothing without me" Pen said proudly

"Idiot you are, if you think like this,

I am not the history but I am the proof of history,

Without a ink even you are nothing" replied the paper,

They kept quiet for few seconds,

But after that they both admitted,

Like everyone, they cant survive alone,

Like everyone they also have their strengths and weaknesses,

Like everyone they dont compete but complete each other,

Like everyone they wont be able to survive if they keep looking at each others negatives,

Atlast they shook hands,

I smiled after seeing all this,

Till my alarm clock played the spoiled sport again,

Gosh! it was just a dream,

But what a message it gave,

We can only live peacefully by loving each other,

Fight has no place in this world,

We all the incomplete without each other,

Like paper and pen lets ignore each others' negatives.

Lets complete each other by becoming better human beings.

Author's Note

criticism welcomed

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked your thoughts in the poem. The battle inside the mind can be a dangerous one.
"We all the incomplete without each other,
Like paper and pen lets ignore each others' negatives.
Lets complete each other by becoming better human beings."
The above lines are true. Leading with kindness, concern and love. This world would be a better place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir for the kind feedback ... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Interesting and with a moral and a message for life!
Interdependence sustains life the way it is, but most of us forgets to believe this.
Great write.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much .. the credit for it goes to Deepika.
http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Bestofme173/1512353/
This was her poem...I just borrowed the idea with her permission and wrote it in my way... thanks anyway :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh good!
Well your version is good. Will check the original as well.
You are welcome.

[Solar]

A worthy message in these verses - about competition and completion.

Perhaps not exclusive to each other, but they can complement each other in the creative process?

'War and Peace' both part of the great human epic, no?

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Solar. Appreciate your kind words :)

[zunie frost]

wow !!!!!such a thought provoking work !!!!!
i really like the why you convey your message !!!!!
yup !!!! you are right !!! we all should help love and care about each other and make this world a better place to live

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for your kind appreciation :)

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!!

[Heartful5160]

Great write. There are many people in this world that think that fighting is the solution but it's not at all. I'm glad you have an outlook on life like this. Great write once again and keep writing!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for your kind words :)

[nazia]

Your paper and pen are a really good "jodi". Loved the vision you created with them and may you create many more great works with them :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Nazia but credit of it goes to Deepika :)

[Prashant Pandey]

That was splendid. tell your pen and paper thanks for this message. :-)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Prashant :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Very interesting read about the fight of a paper and pen, nicely done

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much :)

[Saddam]

An excellent and interesting write my friend.
Just enjoyed it wholly...

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much :)