Just go for the kill

You need to counter-attack to kill thats killing you

"Sir we are surrounded by the enemy" yelled the soldier,

"Thats great now you can fire anywhere and kill them" replied the general,

What if burdens are taking heavy toll on you?

What if you find yourself in the mid of sorrows?

There is something called counter-attack,

Take everyone and everything by surprise,

Just go for the kill,

Laugh at the things you cant control,

Not everyone and everything is perfect,

Just learn to take control by freeing yourself from yourself,

Surprise yourself, feel that energy,

Worst cant go more wrong,

Failure cant rule you,

Just go for the kill,

Like those soldiers in the mid,

You have whole space to look at,

When you lie on the ground against your back,

Stand up, dont lose so easily,

Counter attack, kill your worries,

Just stand up and fight.

Reviews

[Avinash]

The war is the best example to draw courage from. A nice write for self motivation.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Avinash :)

[nazia]

Sometimes you do need to counterattack. thoughtful and well written too :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I do agree.
"Counter attack, kill your worries,
Just stand up and fight."
We must go forward and stand our ground. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir for your words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Saddam]

Counter attack, kill your worries,
Just stand up and fight.

Revolutionary write. Just go for it. A master's order can be followed.
Beautiful.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Saddam for the lovely words :)

[Saddam]

Welcome friend....

[Deepika]

A great idea and a revolutionary attitude anurag :) just like when you are drenched totally you don't have the fear of chill water any more. circumstances mould us to take charges and overcome hurdles!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Its the best way to conquer your fears... whether from the enemy or from within... thank you so much Deepika :)

[Emily]

I love it!
I ever thought it would be about war before I clicked on it!
Keep it up!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for appreciation :)

[Sami Khalil]

Let us fight the good fight that frees us all in the end of all cycles of evil. An excellent write...:).....

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......

[Gurleen Saluja]

An inspirational write, well compared life with border persons. Thanks for sharing. :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind review M'am :)

[Prashant Pandey]

Energetic and full of power. By listening these words a soldier will definitely try till his last breath and will kill dem even if he is surrounded by thousands. Needed words. Loved it.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind review Prashant...:)